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smoshyluver September 18 2011, 19:18:02 UTC
God damn cliffhangers.......
I loved it! :D I seriously can't wait til the next chapter! When do you think you'll have it done? Hopefully you won't make it too long of a wait....

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hvnlyumbrlla September 18 2011, 19:21:59 UTC
Hehe sowwy, it felt natural to cliff-hangify it D:
All new chapters come out on Sundays (Saturdays if I have time) I would do it sooner, but school takes up most of my life!

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smoshyluver September 18 2011, 20:12:19 UTC
I feel you bruh, school sucks

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louiselecaca September 18 2011, 19:36:17 UTC
I love your story T^T
Ian is soooo cute.
At the end I was like "Ooooh yes good idea Anthony *w* .. What ? this is the end of this chapter ? T^T I want moore"
u_u can't wait for the next chapter

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hvnlyumbrlla September 18 2011, 22:17:23 UTC
Thank you mucho <3
:) Don't worry, it just makes the next chapter that more better! :D

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arollinggirl September 18 2011, 20:51:02 UTC
JKNSADJKNSADKJN LEAVE IT TO YOU TO LEAVE A COMPLETELY DELICIOUS CLIFFHANGER SJNKDSANJCANJDSANJKSAD
Shay <3

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hvnlyumbrlla September 18 2011, 22:18:04 UTC
Muahahahahahah ;)
And I know, I love Shay to pieces. I had to include him in the story :P

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arollinggirl September 19 2011, 20:16:41 UTC
Haha, me too, although I haven't watched his vids in a long time :/.
He's always so happy though. Really brightens up your day :D

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hvnlyumbrlla September 19 2011, 20:33:03 UTC
I haven't been able to either, stupid school! GAH!

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orangefriday September 18 2011, 22:05:00 UTC
WHAT THE FUCK?
WHAT THE FUCK?
WHAT THE FUCK?
(Do you know HeyItsMilly? From the Fine bros? Read the above like her.)

GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

You suck.

But you still rock because I really like this story and so much suspense as to WHY THEY NEED TO KISS? Sam must be the biggest pervert or the biggest stalker of the Ianthony comm.

I really like how you included the LA scene in there, to make it realistic and the going through the crowd scene? GAH! CUTE! Like like like like!

Also Ian's debate. *sigh* So cute!

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hvnlyumbrlla September 18 2011, 22:20:46 UTC
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Milly <333

I know I suck hehe, I'm building up the tension ;D But I know, I typed the end last night and I was like "hmm, should include the kiss? Well, it seems natural to end it like this, oh god they're going to kill me"
I'm so evil...

I'm glad you still love me though <3 and the story! You will find out Sam's motivation soon *cackles*

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michaelangelo24 September 18 2011, 22:09:39 UTC
Darn it, I want to see them practice kissing... a lot! :P I loved the build up, the subtle hints of attraction. I can't wait until the next part... literally, post it now. ;D

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hvnlyumbrlla September 18 2011, 22:22:37 UTC
Ohhh I wish I could! Right now. But homework and school are beckoning me >:[
Sunday sunday you will be them take part in the most satisfying affection-fest, I swear ;)

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