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hvnlyumbrlla December 4 2011, 02:25:30 UTC
Hahaha @ rofling xD

I feel like Ian would write something like that though!

Coming right up! <33

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bloodygoddess15 December 4 2011, 01:50:09 UTC
I like it alot! Very nice!

I love man-dog-women............. I think..........

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hvnlyumbrlla December 4 2011, 02:25:46 UTC
Thank you! <3

MDW FTW!

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ihanoverian December 4 2011, 05:32:38 UTC
I love man-dog-women. I live in Canada, so I see them around quite a bit. We get used to their presence.

AS FOR THE STORY. asdfghjklkjhgfs
SO FREAKING UPLIFTING.
I love how powerful your syntax and diction is. The result was some pretty spot-on imagery! I could almost hear Ian's voice, when reading his little note. Even when Anthony was acting so dull and lifeless, he was still written very much in character. AND his actions reminded me of myself when I have those days. Really good fic! I loved it!

I can't wait to read more. <3

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hvnlyumbrlla December 4 2011, 05:59:34 UTC
YOU LIVE IN CANADA!? Hug me. Right now. I love Canadians. Not sure why... xD

EEEEE! Thank you for such a great compliment <333 According to everyone's comments, I guess I got Anthony and Ian's voice right! SCORE :D "syntax and diction" pffft, woman you sound like my AP English teacher. xD

I can't wait to read more from you, too! ;) I liked the smut you wrote a little while ago :D

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saint_elsewhere December 4 2011, 05:47:26 UTC
AWW. Your stories always make me smile! :)

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hvnlyumbrlla December 4 2011, 06:01:09 UTC
Thank you <333

Yours do too! Like "Confessions"? Hgdhjd. I check back every day (multiple times) to catch an update xD

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saint_elsewhere December 4 2011, 06:02:05 UTC
Haha! Part 10 should be out in a few days. I'm still writing it. URGH. It's so long!

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hvnlyumbrlla December 4 2011, 06:04:30 UTC
YAYYYYYYY! *dances*

Take your time :) Don't be bothered if it's long. I think longer is better! (thatwasshesaidlolwut)

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michaelangelo24 December 4 2011, 10:09:59 UTC
I can totally relate to Anthony. I just had one of those days, except I didn't have an Ian to cheer me up. :/

I loved the end of Ian's letter. "Intense and Undying Love that Burns True and Strong" indeed. ;D

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