Just Kidding

[hvnlyumbrlla]

Title: Just Kidding
Pairings: Ian/ Anthony
Rating/Warnings: It's clean, yo! Angsty, but clean.
Summary: Why would he ever even dare to say it, when he knows the reaction he’ll receive?
A/N: Here's the story (it's actually quite funny): my friend recently found out I write slash ff (SHE DOES TO, I WOULD HAVE NEVER GUESSED!) and she told me that I should

Comments

[hvnlyumbrlla]

Awwww, thank you! That would be so cool if you could commentate on it xD

[orangefriday]

“What?”
Confusion.Denial.Here’s my chance.Take it back.Collect the words.Right the wrong.

Favourite line!

And gosh, you are a troll, too. "Just kidding". JUST KIDDING?! CMON IAN! GROW SOME BALLS!

In all seriousness, this was beautiful and interesting. I was waiting for Anthony to react and then I was waiting for Ian to own up (and they both disappointed me but that's ok, because that's the point right? :P)

A soft caress upon the ears I like this line too.

I love the dramatic one word lines too. I like this and this and this and this. I LOVE THE WHOLE THING. :)

[orangefriday]

Oh geez, I forgot to wish you good luck with your assignment. I know I've written a story in grade seven that had very questionable characters with a very questionable friendship. Gotta slip in some slash there too.

In my creative writing course, I didn't even hide it. I was just like, "I'm gunna write a gay story. I'm in uni, no need to hide the truth." LOL And I bet if you told your teacher this is actually about Ian and Anthony aka a gay relationship, she would be even MORE IMPRESSED!

[hvnlyumbrlla]

WE HAVE THE SAME FAVORITE LINE! :D I like breaking the rules of grammar and sentence structure when I write poetry, I feel so BA! It was Anthony who said "just kidding", Anthony is the ball-less one ;P

Thank you so much for the amazing comment...comments? ;D I loved this assignment, just a simple moment in time. Slashy. And it got me a grade *dances*

As for telling her it was a gay-relationship, I don't know how it would go over. She'd probably be fine with it, though! She's open-minded :) MAYBE I JUST WILL (probably not xD I'm too shy).

[orangefriday]

omg omg omg.. I can't believe I read the whole poem wrong. AHHHH *is so embarrassed*

Shit.. LOOOL XD

But yeah, you SHOULD! When I got my short story back.. my TA didn't write much (but then again, he had to mark 50 other stories/poems)... he just said "Good internal conflict. A little choppy." And I kind of went... "... ... THAT'S IT?! *shakes paper*"

The more feedback you get, the better! Especially since your teacher sounds like she would give real good, thoughtful feedback. :)

[boredomdelux]

Aaaah, I read this like three days ago, but then my interwebs diedz and I couzn't comment on awezomness :((

But THIS just gave me some hella respect for you. Even more than I had already. I consider myself someone who can write some different genres (for school, mostly. Sadly I never get around to writing much on my spare time :( ), but poetry has always been the one thing that I just couldn't do. And this was so beautiful, so creative and the meaning behind was very well conveyed to us readers. And I also loved that you were able to take a moment which would have only lasted a few seconds in real life, and make it into this piece of art!

I wuww your witing<3

[hvnlyumbrlla]

That's ok! I love getting comments, even a little while after I post :)

Awww, thank you so much! I can't believe you all are so impressed with this, I haven't done much poetry and I thought this came out mediocre at best. YOU ALL GIVE ME CONFIDENCE. THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANK

I wuwv you and your amazing comments that make me smile <3

[freshdumbledore]

I knew that you have talent but that you could put so many emotions in this small amount of lines is just amazing. Of course the fact that I knew who you characterize added to the mood and I could really feel his emotions. I hope your class liked it(if they didn't they must be ignorant bastards who have no idea what good writing is).

[hvnlyumbrlla]

Thank you <3333
I'm glad you could feel the emotion, that was the goal!
My teacher loved it :D