Time Bomb

[hilson_is_love]

Wilson knocked on House's apartment door for the third time that week. He had been seeing House more and more lately, and Cuddy was getting suspicious.
“Come in!” called House, “it’s open!” He sounded slightly tipsy. 
Good, thought Wilson, he’s easier to talk to when he’s like that.
Wilson pushed the door open and he stepped over the threshold. There

Comments

[anonymous]

naive

[hilson_is_love]

Wow, you know if you had any guts you would either sign in or not respond. I wrote this at the beginning of my fanfiction writing, when I had little experience and was just testing the waters.
I was fifteen, quite honestly.

But, to be fair, you are entitled to you opinion.

Thank you for reading, but think about how you respond next time. Possibly check the dates of publication before flaming, and maybe come up with something more inventive than 'naive' if you plan to flame. Oh, and some constructive crit. would be appreciated.