LJIdol 3 Strikes - Week 2 - What Really Matters

Feb 21, 2022 00:49

Sunrise. The faint morning light illuminates the shiny green leaves of a field of coffee plants. Stock audio clips of twittering birds play in the background. All is peaceful. Then, a terrible streak of flame across the sky. Dramatic music swells as the mysterious object from space plummets through the sky and crashes into the field with a ( Read more... )

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furzicle February 22 2022, 18:35:31 UTC
AAAAHHH! Finally something worth spending time reading!!! I will read your entries first from now on!!!!!* (As I blissfully imbibe Refulgent Sunrise Finest Coffee, decaf.)

*Not sure that reading yours first will bode well for whatever entries I read subsequently.

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hwango February 23 2022, 03:01:19 UTC
Well, I am honored to be bumped to the head of the line. And may I just compliment you on your excellent choice of beverage. Mmm...Refulgent Sunrise Finest Coffee.

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md_meezer February 22 2022, 21:28:05 UTC
LOLOL ... so funny. as a coffee drinker myself, I can appreciate that aliens attacking the world takes a backseat but aliens attacking the coffee, thems fighting words!

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hwango February 23 2022, 03:03:31 UTC
There are some lines we just can't let invading armies of murderous aliens cross. And what better beverage to drink while we discuss where those lines are than Refulgent Sunrise Finest Coffee? = )

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drippedonpaper February 24 2022, 02:08:50 UTC
That made me laugh. And man, how gullible we humans are when we watch movies/shows. Great job!

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hwango February 24 2022, 22:44:29 UTC
Glad it amused! Thanks!

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viagra February 25 2022, 15:25:07 UTC
I get a sort of Douglas Adams feel to a lot of your writing, but I think your sense of humor is a little weirder than his (in the best way, of course). "So many coffee plants tragically killed. But the horror is not over" got me right off the bat, and you kept it going through the whole thing. Really good job with this one, and a very refreshing take on the prompt! :)

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hwango February 26 2022, 08:27:36 UTC
Adams was definitely one of my early influences, and it's only appropriate that the idea that my sense of humor is weirder reminds me of a quote from his works - "Don't you try to outweird me, I get stranger things than you free with my breakfast cereal.“ = )

Glad you enjoyed it!

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baxaphobia February 25 2022, 16:24:37 UTC
Aliens can't steal my coffee! I'll fight to the death! Smile. Fun entry!

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hwango February 26 2022, 08:28:28 UTC
Those aliens will RUE THE DAY. = )

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