Fic: I'm Not Drunk

[he_will_save_me]

title:i’m not drunk
author:he_will_save_me aka Aurielle
rating:nc-17
pairing:bam margera/ryan dunn aka dugera
summary:ryan nodded quickly and moved down to the end of the bed again. He started peeling off his layers of clothing, not saying a word as he locked the door.
warnings:mansexing. rimming. first time. the teeniest amount of schmoop.
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Comments

[maddykerr]

Ohhhh.... well done!
Very raunchy! haha
i liike!
loved dat shit.

[he_will_save_me]

Raunchy=funness.
So glad you enjoyed!
Thanks for commenting!

[anonymous]

Oh my god, that was sooo good. I loved it. ^_^

The ending kicked ass.

[he_will_save_me]

Thanks so much! *whore for love*

[mortuaryhall]

0.0

So hot!!
Love you

[he_will_save_me]

*is lurved*

Thanks for reading!!

[mortuaryhall]

anytime my friend^_^ I enjoy your style

[pontaloon666]

awesome story! but i picked up a few errors that you can fix in like 2 seconds:
"They guys were over at Bam’s house having drinks" should be "The guys were over at Bam’s house having drinks"
"careful not to spill his drink, he might still want to drink it" should be "careful not to spill his drink. He might still want to drink it"
"had after the 2003 MTV VMAs. He and Bam had ditched" should be "had after the 2003 MTV VMAs he and Bam had ditched"
...after that i got a tad bit distracted
and btw I LOVE THIS! "So what if Bam likes to sleep on Ryan’s lap when they kick back and watch Spike TV" JUST LIKE A KITTEN!

[he_will_save_me]

Fixing those now. Lol. Figures I wouldn't see them til now haha.

Yeah, hotgaymansex can be a bit distracting.

I'm so glad you love!

I think I love you.

[anonymous]

Dude, you made me love this pairing.
Totally does not help at all that I'm watching Jackass right now.
xD

(Gods, I hate being anon but I'm way to lazy to make an account. Actually, I think I have one. I don't fucking know.)