gosh this was just so beautiful ;_; you somehow managed to convey so many sensations and emotions and it was truly beautiful. I especially loved your characterizations in this, like how you managed to make Jonghyun needy and tender and yet still playful <3 and I love how the power balance was rather equal, how they were both in charge at times that was so wonderfullllllll And Jonghyun riding Kibum? YES PLEASE I'VE BEEN CRAVING THAT FOREVER AND YOU WROTE IT SO WELL "Kibum stops him with a single move, sitting up against the board, pulling him close and kissing him." I really really really like this line x.x Thank you for blessing us with such wonderful smut ;_______; I loved it so much. It's gorgeous that's what it is THANK YOU
I just have this strong urge to whisper "sorry" ten times and then "thank you thank you thank you" because ...
But. I am happy you loved it omfg?
I was thinking of decent reply but all that comes on my mind is gratitude (and embarrassment hahahaha). I'm so sorry, here I am, all giddy but having no idea what to write as a reply, oh except this one thing: I like equal power balance, and for things to be versatile. I think there is way more options to experiment and write compared to fixed images of relationships. BUT of course they exist too. I just, yeah. Prefer things versatile. ^^
So actually thank YOU for commenting, god knows I really needed some feedback after months of silence.
i don't even know how you do it... this was gorgeous in every way ;; i was reading very slowly trying not to finish it too fast (lmao) and i think that made it even better. i mean it was dirty, sensual, loving, intimate... kinda just perfect. how close they were made me emotional ;; He sees his teary eyes (they are closed, but tears accumulate at the edge) and he licks them away. i love this so much omg and also just jonghyun riding kibum... what more can i ask for really thanks for sharing lovely <3 you're awesome
ISTG your comments... they always make me grin and giddy and silly and thank you thank you thank you for this? If your opinion is that this fic was gorgeous, then mine is that your comment is everything I need, really. <3
gosh this is so beautiful *^* like immediately after "His lips tiptoe across Jonghyun’s collarbones" i lost it and made the weirdest noise and now i cant look anyone in the eye omg this was too romantic and wonderful and perfect *coughs* please autograph my face
OMG I'M SORRY you can't look anyone in the eye, no! But yes I will autograph your face with a thank-you cookie or something because wow, what a cute comment <3
No, no no no I mean. <3 at first for you but then. No I am embarrassed...SO much you have no idea. You know how I always rant about things and ... now I just. What is this reply. But honestly, Kibum is always nice and soft and cuddly, well maybe not entirely true but? We can pretend, eh?
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And Jonghyun riding Kibum? YES PLEASE I'VE BEEN CRAVING THAT FOREVER AND YOU WROTE IT SO WELL
"Kibum stops him with a single move, sitting up against the board, pulling him close and kissing him." I really really really like this line x.x
Thank you for blessing us with such wonderful smut ;_______; I loved it so much. It's gorgeous that's what it is THANK YOU
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This was wonderful dear author.
Thank you sooooo much for this beautiful smut. <3
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But. I am happy you loved it omfg?
I was thinking of decent reply but all that comes on my mind is gratitude (and embarrassment hahahaha). I'm so sorry, here I am, all giddy but having no idea what to write as a reply, oh except this one thing: I like equal power balance, and for things to be versatile. I think there is way more options to experiment and write compared to fixed images of relationships. BUT of course they exist too. I just, yeah. Prefer things versatile. ^^
So actually thank YOU for commenting, god knows I really needed some feedback after months of silence.
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He sees his teary eyes (they are closed, but tears accumulate at the edge) and he licks them away. i love this so much omg
and also just jonghyun riding kibum... what more can i ask for really
thanks for sharing lovely <3 you're awesome
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like immediately after "His lips tiptoe across Jonghyun’s collarbones" i lost it and made the weirdest noise and now i cant look anyone in the eye omg this was too romantic and wonderful and perfect
*coughs* please autograph my face
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What is this reply.
But honestly, Kibum is always nice and soft and cuddly, well maybe not entirely true but? We can pretend, eh?
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