Close To Me, 758 w

[hyeongsoap]

Comments

[kouyou_x3]

wooooow its really unexpected to see it this way around!! its so good T__T and has so much potential ;; but I loved all ur work already :3

[hyeongsoap]

eyyy sweetie thank you T__T ((and I know about potential? I was thinking so many things afterwards? How did Jonghyun get a tattoo? (Kibum dared him that one time when they were a little too drunk so they went to a tattoo studio of a questionable reputation) How did they meet? (In High School. Kibum was a transfer student and somehow he found himself in a fight with Jonghyun. Nobody won though, they fell on the ground, exhausted and with bruised skin and Jonghyun was like 'I'm hungry, let's eat something') What is Kibum anyway? (I don't know) Is Jonghyun a cop? etc.

So I agree with you and thank you again <3

[kouyou_x3]

well u sound like ud know how to write a prequel >D

[hyeongsoap]

heh <3 we shall see. I won't promise anything but thank you for your sweet words ^^

[sluthyun]

yesss love the ending, so harsh and bittersweet, just how i like it. good job! <3

[hyeongsoap]

ahhhhhhhhhhh darling. Thank you so fucking much. You are always so sweet to me <3 <3 <3 Thank you ^^

[life_not_knife]

This was beautiful!!! I can't describe how much I loved this but I really really did.

It's a very fun subject and a unique one. The plot, the dialogue and the writing were all superb.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Xx L xX

[hyeongsoap]

Thank yu thank you thank you so much! I don't know if it's unique or not but when I got inspired I was like 'this is it. i want this.'

So thank YOU for commenting, because comments make me grin and happy and it's like indication for me I should keep thinking and trying to get better <3

[life_not_knife]

I don't know why I haven't come across your other stories before but I am now going to read them [after stalking your journal of course haha] You're a lovely writer, keep it up!!! hehehe.

Xx L xX

[hyeongsoap]

ohhhh no don't do that (i'll blush and hide because i'm usually pretty much embarrassed of everything i wrote a few months ago...) but instead of whining i should be thankful! I have a feeling the lovely one is you :D \(^^)/

[timemachineride]

so bittersweet. ;-;

i really like this idea. badass jongkey is awesome and all but of course this story really shows how rueful and hard it can all be...

and urghh the end, jong let me hold you. or let kibum hold you, whatever.

really nice work ♥

[hyeongsoap]

ahhhh!!! thank you so so much \(^^)/ and yesss i love badass jongkey kicking asses and stuff. like just look at that vcr (time's up? i'm not sure how it is called but did you see them key's kicks woah and jonghyun *cries*) so. badass jongkey is awesome just like that :D
let us hold you together with kibum!!! (even when kibum flees we'll still hold you)

[timemachineride]

no problem ^^

RIGHT??? it's so attractive i swear. i wanna write something like this as well, badass au is so tempting.

oh yes i love that vcr. *u* i think one is called like dark mode or something?? and that lucky bad guy gets a face full of key's crotch.

[hyeongsoap]

ohfuckwhygifwhy

but yesssss. kibum looks so badass here. like even if it's just doing stunt for the camera i'm down for it anytime. :((( and this haircut and idk thank you for this wonderful contribution i'll weep a little now.

and yes yes yes write something :D

[astridminjichoi]

omg wow this was really clever >_> it had me wondering all the backstory for this fic, all the history jonghyun and key had here ;_; and i loved how everything was so in medias res and action and intense. i wanna hug jonghyun though :( it broke my heart how jonghyun could go from so badass to vulnerable in so little time..
really good fic, i wish there was more omg. thank you for sharing bby!

[hyeongsoap]

ahhh i'm curious too! as silly as it sounds i too want to know the backstory. :3 hm i hope i get some time to discover it.
and we all want to hug jonghyun :( and thank you sweetheart for your lovely comment it made me so happy i can't even tell?????