I had a perfect haiku moment this morning

Jun 05, 2013 20:12

Morning Commute

Cars zoom on I-5
As six grey goslings walk by.
I whisper a prayer.

This entry was originally posted at http://hymnia.dreamwidth.org/174930.html.

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coastal_spirit June 6 2013, 13:27:30 UTC
That's lovely!

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hymnia June 6 2013, 21:38:30 UTC
Thank you!

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annie_jaye June 6 2013, 21:17:30 UTC
I like it! :)

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hymnia June 6 2013, 21:38:52 UTC
Thanks!

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major_dallas June 7 2013, 15:49:55 UTC
Nice, of course if I were on I-5 I'd being praying too ;)

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hymnia June 7 2013, 20:57:47 UTC
:)

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