Platinum Gen Fic

[hyoutan]

I, um, wrote a fic. For Prince of Tennis. I feel both accomplished, and distressed (that THIS is the fandom that gets me back into writing fics). I will probably be editing this from now until I am satisfied with it (i.e. forever), but I figured I'd post this before I forgot/left for Australia. Leave feedback if you like it! <3

Title: Break Point (

Comments

[cuheryn]

um. squee! You're fantastic and I love you! ^_^
#6 is wonderful, as is #10, even if it's a bit painful. Also, I absolutely love Yagyuu's comparison of playing with Niou to a speeding bike. And there's something kinda odd, but great about Yagyuu not needing or wanting to know everything about Niou, but still knowing enough to be him.
Overall: WIN!

[hyoutan]

Thank you! *blushes*

I'm glad you liked it...! >^_^< I had a lot of fun writing it.

[faded_lace]

That was lovely! I agree with the above; the speeding bike metaphor is perfect and the comments about Golden Pair work so well, too. Like you said, we have slightly different views of the pair, but I really enjoyed this. I think you're really rubbing off on me, I'm starting to love this pair a little too much! XD; Great work, I wish you wrote more!

[platinumpair]

I loved that. I love the style of 20 truths and those things about the characters. It's wonderful to see how people perceive Niou and Yagyuu.

[apathy_irath]

Really like the way this was written- both the style and the layout. =3 Even if my take on the pair is slightly different, I enjoyed reading your take on it, and found some of the metaphors and descriptions to be nicely fitting (I especially liked the comparison to the Golden Pair).

In any case, I really enjoyed it- thanks for sharing. 8D

[creepingtowards]

I like it ♥

It's really lovely, the style, the metaphors, the beginning and the end and the flow of the piece.

Thank you~