Fic for myst_fujiwara

[summerslaughter]

Title: One Night with Chocolate
Recipient: myst_fujiwara
Pairing/Characters: Oshitari/Atobe
Rating: PG
Warnings: None I can think of, but it might make you hungry.
Disclaimer: Tennis no Oujisama belongs to Konomi-sensei, not me; I only borrow for fun.
Summary: Oshitari and Atobe prepare for the last White Day of their high school careers.
Notes: It's been a

Comments

[thesundaywriter]

Ooh, this is making me hungry and I don't have much of a sweet tooth lol

A delicious read~ and poor Atobe denied from chocolate~

[calembours]

"I am immune to your disdain," he purred around the melting drop. "I have truffles."

Oh, win. Oh very win.

[ataraxistence]

I woke up in the morning, checked my f-list, and then I saw this! =DDD It's absolutely fabulous. Thank you SO MUCH. I am going to have a couple of pieces of the lovely mint chocolate I bought yesterday immediately after this. xDDD

I love your characterization of Oshitari (I can just hear the dialogue between them, it's great), and Atobe's torturous self-denial is just hilarious. And of course, it helps that I've always associated Oshitari's voice with chocolate. >DDD

"I am immune to your disdain," he purred around the melting drop. "I have truffles." and 'Here sat Hyoutei's crown prince, about to be dethroned by a small, round truffle.' - These two are my absolute favorite lines. =DD

Thank you so much! =D It's a great fic. ♥ ♥ ♥

[medieval128]

This was a sweet read. ♥

I adored the language in this. It set such a rich-thick-sultry tone to this entire fic that when I read this line--The chocolate began to melt instantly, slipping down against his throat warm and seductive--chocolate was not what I was thinking. Also, your characterisation of Oshitari and Atobe was wonderful. Oshitari was indulgent and romantic, and Atobe had just enough self-righteousness that he could hold his own, but not so much that he wouldn't give in to Oshitari in the end.

All in all, good job on this!

[bunnysquee]

wow! this was absolutely yummy - your description of chocolate made me drool! and poor atobe - defeated because oshitari's a messy eater.

very amusing - thank you for writing.