Reversal Chapter 4
This part was when I continued writing after a long absence of nothing.
Title: Reversal
Show: DNAngel
Rating: Uh...Pg-13.
Genre: General/Humor
Warning: Shortish chapter and some odd impossible occurences. Lotta OCs
Disclaimer: Not mine, man. If it were mine, some of the characters would have done the, *cough* can-can by now.
Description: Krad calls out Dark in order to talk and Dark finally realises his host is a girl.
4. MORE plot?
Okay, I'm not going to apologise for this being waaaay too late (Like, a year or two??) because I have no excuse. I only hope the content makes up for it. XD Enjoy chapter four and, oh yeah, fear my plot.
This story idea is all mine, even though most of the characters may not be. I am not making money off this. Blah blah blah. You guys should know me by now.
/Chapter 4
"Your 'love' doesn't even know you exist."
"No!" She cried, pushing against him without momentum and he only held her tighter. "Seirios!" She screamed. She felt as if she were losing her mind, slipping quickly into oblivion. Hardly feeling his lips press to hers she fell into a deep dreamless sleep.
It was an odd thing that Dark Mousy was awake. That he was awake feeling the touch of someone's elses lips was something entirely different. It was beyond odd.
He groggily opened his eyes and stared into the gold ones in front of him. When one wakes up, they do not normally stare into someone else's eyes.
Dark may be particularly slow when he wakes up, but not even he could deny that he was in danger. "Krad!?" He jerked his head back sharply enough to hit the wall behind him and pushed at the other boy's arms.
The white demon smirked in victory and pulled away, letting his rival fall to the ground in an ungraceful heap. "You are so much slower in your host's form than you are in your own, but I must admit it was a close contest." He reached over and flicked on the light.
The thief huffed in annoyance and stood up, not registering Krad's comment until he noticed his height in comparison to the rest of the room. He turned towards a mirror as if in a horror film and his breath caught.
Downstairs, Riku didn't have to say a word to Satoshi. The call only just connected when the house was filled with the sound of the girliest shriek they ever heard coming out of Seriso's throat. Riku closed her mouth in shock as she listened to the dial tone.
Krad couldn't help it. He laughed. It was the most honest sound that Dark had ever heard from him, and it was at his expense. "One would assume that with such huge...differences...that you would have noticed sooner."
Dark just crossed his arms over his strangely female chest and sat on the bed, insulted. "Just tell me what you want, Krad. Before I open that door and let him seal you."
"I'm no more afraid of the little Niwa than I was when he was actually little." He checked his nails. "I propose a truce." He waited while Dark choked in shock on his own saliva.
"T-truce?" He asked, caught off guard for the first time in ages by his artwork other. "Why would you propose a truce? We're enemies."
Krad smirked and crossed his arms. He was still in his own host's body as well, the tight clothing clinging to his arms as he moved. "Our families are no longer enemies and I have reason to believe there is a third party that wants us." He got straight to the point. Poking fun at Dark was all well and good, but there were times when he needed to be completely serious. This was one of those times.
"O-oh." He thought about it. It did make some kind of sense. "Then...I can unlock the door and hold back...er...her...dad?"
"I would appreciate being able to speak before being sealed. If I can recall correctly, and from what my host has told me, our families will not exactly be happy with my presence."
Dark smirked. "What an understatement. All right. Shake on it then. Your word." He stuck out his hand for the other man to shake.
After a moments thought, he nodded. "My word."
They shook on it.
Satoshi didn't know what to think as he got to his brother-in-law's house. He hadn't exactly waited for an explanation, but after that scream...He didn't quite think he wanted to. He didn't bother to knock, just entering the house and moving upstairs to his niece's bedroom. Daisuke and Riku were standing there, anxious, one holding onto the doorknob and trying to listen while the other bounced from foot to foot. Finding himself with an armful of panicked sister he glanced, confused, at Dai. "Okay, can someone explain to me-" He was cut off by the sound of a click and the door opening.
Seriso stood by the door, smiling nervously and then moved aside to let them in. Once they were inside, they could see Seirios standing by the window, calmly staring out over the street. Satoshi glanced at them both then did a mental doubletake. No...that's wrong. It was Dark that was apologising to Daisuke for worrying them so much. By the window, his son didn't stand quite like that. He was too tense.
He glowered at the boy. "Krad."
The white demon turned to face him, golden eyes softening slightly. "Satoshi-sama."
Daisuke looked between them and then looked into Seriso's eyes. "Dark?"
"Heh, hi 'dad'." She- no, he. Satoshi could feel a headache coming on. He put his hand behind his head and smiled, moving closer to the bed to stand next to his other. The three of them were suddenly very confused.
"I thought Krad was the bad guy?" Riku stated bluntly. The four of them stared and Dark began to chuckle. Krad just smiled and resumed his window staring. "What, am I wrong?" The poor woman looked between the two in confusion.
Satoshi shook his head. "No, you're not wrong. However this is a bit weird, even for him. What's going on, Krad?"
Dark nodded at the other man. "He's our ally now. Since our families are no longer at war, he has no use to fight against us." He gave them a moment to swallow that thought, since it took him time too. "Actually, we think there's someone new."
Thinking about it, Satoshi reasoned that was probably true, but still... "Okay. Fine. He's on our side. Krad, go away. Give me my son back." Silence.
Krad's eyebrows knit together. "I...can't." He mumbled.
Daisuke's eyes widened and he stared at Dark. The man shrugged and shook his head. "Wonderful. Just wonderful. Our kids are trapped in their own heads!" Satoshi sighed as the other two groaned.
Dark stared into the bathroom mirror, stumped. The body he was in was agile, lithe, and physically fit. Emiko definately refused to let up in her training sessions, god forbid her family get lazy. Clothes were a little baggy normally, but filled out nicely with his own body. Hair was shortish and didn't get in the way. It was flexible. In fact, it was nearly perfect.
Nearly perfect wasn't good enough.
He stared sourly at the two biggest problems he found with his new body. No wonder his host wore baggy clothes! Gently, he poked the side of one problem. "It bounces..."
He'd seen breasts before, it wasn't exactly that strange a thing. He's even seen bare breasts before, noted to himself to forever avoid 'fan'girls, and they weren't even THAT impressive. Dark just hasn't ever had them before. "Krad." He whined through the door. "It feels weird!" They felt like they would get in the way of his arms. He'd never understand how women can be thieves.
He heard his other chuckle through the door. "Quit fondling your host, Mousy. I'm pretty sure if she were awake, she would be quite angry." Dark knew there was an unspoken comment in the sentence.
"I'm not fondling them! It's not my fault they bounce when I move!" He shouted back. How could Krad be so insensitive to his problems? It wasn't everyday one wakes up as a girl. Well, not if they weren't originally a girl anyway.
Outside, Krad chuckled again. His darker half was always quite amusing.
I'm gonna murder him! His host's voice growled inside his head. He'd better not be doing anything unprofessional to my cousin!
As much fun as it is to poke fun at him, Dark is not that kind of person. You have nothing to worry about. Krad thought, having no problem defending the thief.
Still, beat him up.
He shook his head. Soon, maybe, but not right now. My magic is too dangerous right now. The sigh was almost physical.
"Gah, this is rediculous. I'm coming out to get another shirt. Cover your eyes Krad!" Dark came out, marching to the chest of drawers to hunt for a clean shirt. The other one was draped over the sink, soaked. Krad shook his head, refusing to wonder. He, of course, also refused to acknowledge Dark's request, staring boredly at him as he found a baggy hooded shirt to wear. His own host's mind burned with embarrassment. He smiled. "Okay. Now, we have to figure out how to get back. We can't stay out here forever." Dark announced.
He shrugged, wanting to enjoy the physical world for a bit longer. "We're not allowed to leave the house in these forms and there are no good referances here."
A glare. "I wasn't talking about researching."
"My magic is no more useful than yours, I presume. I tested it when I first appeared out. It's just as unpredictable as my release had been." Dark himself had complained about a lack of control of his memory and power not too long ago. "I'd rather not endanger anyone."
He could see Dark twitch. Apparently the darker half was still unused to Krad caring about anyone. "Well, what are we going to do then?"
Krad smirked and leered at him, pushing off the wall. "I have an idea..."
Daisuke groaned loudly and pitched the book across the room, not caring that it then proceeded to collide with another pile of searched books causing them to all topple and scatter across the floor. He ran both hands through his hair, using the movement to ignore his friend's tired glare. Looking over after a moment, he watched Satoshi also put away another useless book. He was beginning to realise how Satoshi felt for the past few days. The poor man couldn't have gotten very much sleep, pulling all-nighters like this.
He moved over to slowly pick up the fallen stack, giving Dai another sour look. "Nothing." He muttered once finished. "Not a single mention of the possibility in all of my ancestor's records. Back to square one." He dropped into the chair next to Daisuke.
The red-head smiled in sympathy. "Why don't you get some sleep? You've been doing this kind of stuff a lot. I'll head home and ask Dad to help me with an excuse to keep Seriso from school tomorrow."
"Man, Seirios just got enrolled in school -yesterday-. How can he already start a habit of ditching?"
"Not going to think of an excuse?"
"No. The best I'm going to do is 'My son has been possessed, please excuse him from class while we hire an exorcist to get rid of the murderous poltergeist.' I don't think the teachers will take that one very well and I'm too tired to think of something better."
Daisuke laughed loudly. The humor might have been slightly strained, but it was refreshing to hear an attempt at jest from Satoshi every now and then. "Well, go get your sleep and assume Sei ditches. You'd probably want to spend the day was Risa when you guys wake up anyway. She might start to think Krad was stealing you away from her." He smiled at the weak punch he got in reply.
"All right. Too tired to argue with you tonight. Go home. Get out of my house." Satoshi grumped. The thought of crawling in bed next to his wife was almost too difficult to deny. His bed was so warm too...
"Satoshi?" The man opened his eyes sharply to see his brother-in-law standing in front of his chair, already ready to leave. He fell asleep? "Go up to bed. I'll lock the door." He nodded wordlessly and waved as he stood. That meant he didn't have to be polite. Good.
Daisuke smiled and left, making sure the house was completely secure before hand.
/To be continued...
Well, it ended up being a little shorter than I intended, but the next chapter is going to start off with Krad and Dark. Fun no? Bet your wondering what they're doing eh? lmao Gonna have to wait.
Also I apologise for all the plot bunnies. I tried to lighten up the chapter a lot but this part of the plot really wanted to be told as soon as possible. So, to sum up all the information important to the plot so far:
Dark has been summoned for the first time ever in the body of a girl: Niwa Seriso. Not a natural occurance.
Krad had followed soon after, willingly accepted in the body of the Hikari son: Seirios.
Neither of them are sure what the heck is going on. Neither of them can control their magic. Krad has a little more control than Dark because he's a willing occupant.
Seriso is still clueless. She's unconcious when Dark is out, and Dark is unaware when he's inside. He can't control when he changes or changes back. Seirios knows exactly what's going on and is able to talk to Krad whenever he wants.
Right now Krad and Dark are both stuck in their host's bodies, unable to change into themselves all the way or retreat back into their minds.
They've decided there's a third person involved. No one knows who it could be.
Actually, it seems like a lot now that I look at it. XD Oh well, look foreward to some less plotty chapters ahead. There are so many side-scenes that I can type out that would fit so well into the storyline.
Review replies:
Okay, I didn't get to these last chapter so here they are now. I might just do every other chapter or so, to give people time to rant about...whatever. XD
Everto Angelus/DDoR- (1) Yeah, the series did kind of suck. lawl I'm glad you were really excited to see my story and I'm real sorry I can't keep an update schedule. XD (2) :3 Glad you logged. lol Even gladder you liked this chapter. XD
Number 15- (1) Niwa females can't be tamers. That's what makes the situation so weird. The magic is messed up. And as for character relationships? Well, I can break it down if it will help. Daisuke and Riku are married. Seriso is their daughter. She's majorly crushing on Dark, who's currently using her as a host, not that she knows. Dark -just- found out his host is female. Satoshi and Risa are married. Seirios is their son, who's a willing host for Krad. He is very protective towards Seriso, who is his cousin. So far that's it. Though I hope to bring in offspring of more familiar characters.
LoVeLyBaBy-(2) hehe, glad you really liked this chapter. XD It was so fun to imagine. And yes, Krad is back, but what is his plan really? kukukukuku And thank you for your concern. My back was much better after a few days. /pulled another all-nighter/ lmao I plan on updating as much as possible, especially now that I realise I still remember the plot. XD Best story in my account, I don't plan on letting everyone down.
AthrunCagallimadness- (2) 'girliest shriek ever heard from Seriso's throat'. ...I think that would constitute as freaking out, wouldn't you? XD Hey, maybe Krad isn't so evil after all. ponder Question is though: Is he being honest/shrugs/ No, Seriso doesn't know yet. She is quite clueless about everything. hehe I'm so mean. (3) Once again, I apologise for the late update. lol And yeah, Krad is a bit of an asshat. But you get to think now: Is he really all that evil? Or is he really an ally? I do have to say though, Seriso has to get a clue before she can follow anyone's footsteps. XD She's probably most like Risa right now. /shudder/ Dear god, what have I done? j/k
Schizo and Proud- (2) Duh duh duh DUM! I've updated! How about that one? I told you you inspired me. XD And I have to say I'm quite disappointed. You weren't testy enough with me. XDDD Then again, a whole nother chapter had been up after this review so...maybe the offer was up? No, no shounen-ai, but plenty of little inuendos that will only show up on a shounen-ai fan's radar. XDD (3) The beta position is still yours after all this time if you so choose to accept it. XD Although, at least with this chapter you got to be as surprised as everyone else. XD
The Edge of an Oath- (2) lmao I actually had an idea that would make that kind of work. But shhh...not gonna tell. X3
kittenoftime- (2) :3 It is a bit creepy, to think of a guy like that...like THAT. XDD lol Thank you for the compliment.
Redrosemoon- (2) Sorry to keep you waiting I guess. X3 You mean there are more 'girl' themed stories out there/pout/ I wanna see...
Miko102- (2) It was actually a referance to the end of the DNAngel anime. :) I don't really want to spoil it for those who haven't seen it yet though.
RainingHearts- (2/3) :3 And I updated again too. lmao A loooong time after I was expected to. My apologies.
Tsuki no Wish- (2) I'm delighted this is the first DNAngel fic you've read and I apologise that I haven't been updating all that much. Hope you still like this story.
Silent Harlem Angel- (2) Updated, after such a long time. My apologies. :3
Jasmine-san- (2) Question: How will Dark survive as a girl? Answer: ...not very well. lmao
Hittocerebattousai- (3) Whee. Happy you like the plot. :3 Sorry I didn't update as soon as you hoped though. Eheheh...
turtlerad17- (3) Oh you have NO idea how much romantic angst this plot will have. Mwahahahahahaha/cough/ Er...what?
Ki-Ki- (3) I think I may avoid KradxSeriso... .> I don't want her to become a mary-sue or anything. Really. lmao But who knows who she may actually end up with yet. /still hasn't decided/ There are, of course, more OCs to come. So be ready. XD
Dark: You know, despite the shortness of this chapter and the overload of plot and hinted secrets...you sure took a long time.
K: Yeah, what's with that?
Bakura: You forgot all about us!
Mamoru: ...
/sob/ I'm so sorry guys. You kind of just disappeared one day. Thank Steph for calling you back from the abyss!
Muses: Thanks Schizo!
Dark: Anyone up for Mahjong?
Bakura: Hell no! You cheat!
Dark: What?!
K/laughs/ It's good to be back, no?
Mamoru: I concur.
Indeed.
-Hyper Chef
Dark
K
Bakura
Mamoru
Title: Reversal
Show: DNAngel
Rating: Uh...Pg-13.
Genre: General/Humor
Warning: Shortish chapter and some odd impossible occurences. Lotta OCs
Disclaimer: Not mine, man. If it were mine, some of the characters would have done the, *cough* can-can by now.
Description: Krad calls out Dark in order to talk and Dark finally realises his host is a girl.
4. MORE plot?
Okay, I'm not going to apologise for this being waaaay too late (Like, a year or two??) because I have no excuse. I only hope the content makes up for it. XD Enjoy chapter four and, oh yeah, fear my plot.
This story idea is all mine, even though most of the characters may not be. I am not making money off this. Blah blah blah. You guys should know me by now.
/Chapter 4
"Your 'love' doesn't even know you exist."
"No!" She cried, pushing against him without momentum and he only held her tighter. "Seirios!" She screamed. She felt as if she were losing her mind, slipping quickly into oblivion. Hardly feeling his lips press to hers she fell into a deep dreamless sleep.
It was an odd thing that Dark Mousy was awake. That he was awake feeling the touch of someone's elses lips was something entirely different. It was beyond odd.
He groggily opened his eyes and stared into the gold ones in front of him. When one wakes up, they do not normally stare into someone else's eyes.
Dark may be particularly slow when he wakes up, but not even he could deny that he was in danger. "Krad!?" He jerked his head back sharply enough to hit the wall behind him and pushed at the other boy's arms.
The white demon smirked in victory and pulled away, letting his rival fall to the ground in an ungraceful heap. "You are so much slower in your host's form than you are in your own, but I must admit it was a close contest." He reached over and flicked on the light.
The thief huffed in annoyance and stood up, not registering Krad's comment until he noticed his height in comparison to the rest of the room. He turned towards a mirror as if in a horror film and his breath caught.
Downstairs, Riku didn't have to say a word to Satoshi. The call only just connected when the house was filled with the sound of the girliest shriek they ever heard coming out of Seriso's throat. Riku closed her mouth in shock as she listened to the dial tone.
Krad couldn't help it. He laughed. It was the most honest sound that Dark had ever heard from him, and it was at his expense. "One would assume that with such huge...differences...that you would have noticed sooner."
Dark just crossed his arms over his strangely female chest and sat on the bed, insulted. "Just tell me what you want, Krad. Before I open that door and let him seal you."
"I'm no more afraid of the little Niwa than I was when he was actually little." He checked his nails. "I propose a truce." He waited while Dark choked in shock on his own saliva.
"T-truce?" He asked, caught off guard for the first time in ages by his artwork other. "Why would you propose a truce? We're enemies."
Krad smirked and crossed his arms. He was still in his own host's body as well, the tight clothing clinging to his arms as he moved. "Our families are no longer enemies and I have reason to believe there is a third party that wants us." He got straight to the point. Poking fun at Dark was all well and good, but there were times when he needed to be completely serious. This was one of those times.
"O-oh." He thought about it. It did make some kind of sense. "Then...I can unlock the door and hold back...er...her...dad?"
"I would appreciate being able to speak before being sealed. If I can recall correctly, and from what my host has told me, our families will not exactly be happy with my presence."
Dark smirked. "What an understatement. All right. Shake on it then. Your word." He stuck out his hand for the other man to shake.
After a moments thought, he nodded. "My word."
They shook on it.
Satoshi didn't know what to think as he got to his brother-in-law's house. He hadn't exactly waited for an explanation, but after that scream...He didn't quite think he wanted to. He didn't bother to knock, just entering the house and moving upstairs to his niece's bedroom. Daisuke and Riku were standing there, anxious, one holding onto the doorknob and trying to listen while the other bounced from foot to foot. Finding himself with an armful of panicked sister he glanced, confused, at Dai. "Okay, can someone explain to me-" He was cut off by the sound of a click and the door opening.
Seriso stood by the door, smiling nervously and then moved aside to let them in. Once they were inside, they could see Seirios standing by the window, calmly staring out over the street. Satoshi glanced at them both then did a mental doubletake. No...that's wrong. It was Dark that was apologising to Daisuke for worrying them so much. By the window, his son didn't stand quite like that. He was too tense.
He glowered at the boy. "Krad."
The white demon turned to face him, golden eyes softening slightly. "Satoshi-sama."
Daisuke looked between them and then looked into Seriso's eyes. "Dark?"
"Heh, hi 'dad'." She- no, he. Satoshi could feel a headache coming on. He put his hand behind his head and smiled, moving closer to the bed to stand next to his other. The three of them were suddenly very confused.
"I thought Krad was the bad guy?" Riku stated bluntly. The four of them stared and Dark began to chuckle. Krad just smiled and resumed his window staring. "What, am I wrong?" The poor woman looked between the two in confusion.
Satoshi shook his head. "No, you're not wrong. However this is a bit weird, even for him. What's going on, Krad?"
Dark nodded at the other man. "He's our ally now. Since our families are no longer at war, he has no use to fight against us." He gave them a moment to swallow that thought, since it took him time too. "Actually, we think there's someone new."
Thinking about it, Satoshi reasoned that was probably true, but still... "Okay. Fine. He's on our side. Krad, go away. Give me my son back." Silence.
Krad's eyebrows knit together. "I...can't." He mumbled.
Daisuke's eyes widened and he stared at Dark. The man shrugged and shook his head. "Wonderful. Just wonderful. Our kids are trapped in their own heads!" Satoshi sighed as the other two groaned.
Dark stared into the bathroom mirror, stumped. The body he was in was agile, lithe, and physically fit. Emiko definately refused to let up in her training sessions, god forbid her family get lazy. Clothes were a little baggy normally, but filled out nicely with his own body. Hair was shortish and didn't get in the way. It was flexible. In fact, it was nearly perfect.
Nearly perfect wasn't good enough.
He stared sourly at the two biggest problems he found with his new body. No wonder his host wore baggy clothes! Gently, he poked the side of one problem. "It bounces..."
He'd seen breasts before, it wasn't exactly that strange a thing. He's even seen bare breasts before, noted to himself to forever avoid 'fan'girls, and they weren't even THAT impressive. Dark just hasn't ever had them before. "Krad." He whined through the door. "It feels weird!" They felt like they would get in the way of his arms. He'd never understand how women can be thieves.
He heard his other chuckle through the door. "Quit fondling your host, Mousy. I'm pretty sure if she were awake, she would be quite angry." Dark knew there was an unspoken comment in the sentence.
"I'm not fondling them! It's not my fault they bounce when I move!" He shouted back. How could Krad be so insensitive to his problems? It wasn't everyday one wakes up as a girl. Well, not if they weren't originally a girl anyway.
Outside, Krad chuckled again. His darker half was always quite amusing.
I'm gonna murder him! His host's voice growled inside his head. He'd better not be doing anything unprofessional to my cousin!
As much fun as it is to poke fun at him, Dark is not that kind of person. You have nothing to worry about. Krad thought, having no problem defending the thief.
Still, beat him up.
He shook his head. Soon, maybe, but not right now. My magic is too dangerous right now. The sigh was almost physical.
"Gah, this is rediculous. I'm coming out to get another shirt. Cover your eyes Krad!" Dark came out, marching to the chest of drawers to hunt for a clean shirt. The other one was draped over the sink, soaked. Krad shook his head, refusing to wonder. He, of course, also refused to acknowledge Dark's request, staring boredly at him as he found a baggy hooded shirt to wear. His own host's mind burned with embarrassment. He smiled. "Okay. Now, we have to figure out how to get back. We can't stay out here forever." Dark announced.
He shrugged, wanting to enjoy the physical world for a bit longer. "We're not allowed to leave the house in these forms and there are no good referances here."
A glare. "I wasn't talking about researching."
"My magic is no more useful than yours, I presume. I tested it when I first appeared out. It's just as unpredictable as my release had been." Dark himself had complained about a lack of control of his memory and power not too long ago. "I'd rather not endanger anyone."
He could see Dark twitch. Apparently the darker half was still unused to Krad caring about anyone. "Well, what are we going to do then?"
Krad smirked and leered at him, pushing off the wall. "I have an idea..."
Daisuke groaned loudly and pitched the book across the room, not caring that it then proceeded to collide with another pile of searched books causing them to all topple and scatter across the floor. He ran both hands through his hair, using the movement to ignore his friend's tired glare. Looking over after a moment, he watched Satoshi also put away another useless book. He was beginning to realise how Satoshi felt for the past few days. The poor man couldn't have gotten very much sleep, pulling all-nighters like this.
He moved over to slowly pick up the fallen stack, giving Dai another sour look. "Nothing." He muttered once finished. "Not a single mention of the possibility in all of my ancestor's records. Back to square one." He dropped into the chair next to Daisuke.
The red-head smiled in sympathy. "Why don't you get some sleep? You've been doing this kind of stuff a lot. I'll head home and ask Dad to help me with an excuse to keep Seriso from school tomorrow."
"Man, Seirios just got enrolled in school -yesterday-. How can he already start a habit of ditching?"
"Not going to think of an excuse?"
"No. The best I'm going to do is 'My son has been possessed, please excuse him from class while we hire an exorcist to get rid of the murderous poltergeist.' I don't think the teachers will take that one very well and I'm too tired to think of something better."
Daisuke laughed loudly. The humor might have been slightly strained, but it was refreshing to hear an attempt at jest from Satoshi every now and then. "Well, go get your sleep and assume Sei ditches. You'd probably want to spend the day was Risa when you guys wake up anyway. She might start to think Krad was stealing you away from her." He smiled at the weak punch he got in reply.
"All right. Too tired to argue with you tonight. Go home. Get out of my house." Satoshi grumped. The thought of crawling in bed next to his wife was almost too difficult to deny. His bed was so warm too...
"Satoshi?" The man opened his eyes sharply to see his brother-in-law standing in front of his chair, already ready to leave. He fell asleep? "Go up to bed. I'll lock the door." He nodded wordlessly and waved as he stood. That meant he didn't have to be polite. Good.
Daisuke smiled and left, making sure the house was completely secure before hand.
/To be continued...
Well, it ended up being a little shorter than I intended, but the next chapter is going to start off with Krad and Dark. Fun no? Bet your wondering what they're doing eh? lmao Gonna have to wait.
Also I apologise for all the plot bunnies. I tried to lighten up the chapter a lot but this part of the plot really wanted to be told as soon as possible. So, to sum up all the information important to the plot so far:
Dark has been summoned for the first time ever in the body of a girl: Niwa Seriso. Not a natural occurance.
Krad had followed soon after, willingly accepted in the body of the Hikari son: Seirios.
Neither of them are sure what the heck is going on. Neither of them can control their magic. Krad has a little more control than Dark because he's a willing occupant.
Seriso is still clueless. She's unconcious when Dark is out, and Dark is unaware when he's inside. He can't control when he changes or changes back. Seirios knows exactly what's going on and is able to talk to Krad whenever he wants.
Right now Krad and Dark are both stuck in their host's bodies, unable to change into themselves all the way or retreat back into their minds.
They've decided there's a third person involved. No one knows who it could be.
Actually, it seems like a lot now that I look at it. XD Oh well, look foreward to some less plotty chapters ahead. There are so many side-scenes that I can type out that would fit so well into the storyline.
Review replies:
Okay, I didn't get to these last chapter so here they are now. I might just do every other chapter or so, to give people time to rant about...whatever. XD
Everto Angelus/DDoR- (1) Yeah, the series did kind of suck. lawl I'm glad you were really excited to see my story and I'm real sorry I can't keep an update schedule. XD (2) :3 Glad you logged. lol Even gladder you liked this chapter. XD
Number 15- (1) Niwa females can't be tamers. That's what makes the situation so weird. The magic is messed up. And as for character relationships? Well, I can break it down if it will help. Daisuke and Riku are married. Seriso is their daughter. She's majorly crushing on Dark, who's currently using her as a host, not that she knows. Dark -just- found out his host is female. Satoshi and Risa are married. Seirios is their son, who's a willing host for Krad. He is very protective towards Seriso, who is his cousin. So far that's it. Though I hope to bring in offspring of more familiar characters.
LoVeLyBaBy-(2) hehe, glad you really liked this chapter. XD It was so fun to imagine. And yes, Krad is back, but what is his plan really? kukukukuku And thank you for your concern. My back was much better after a few days. /pulled another all-nighter/ lmao I plan on updating as much as possible, especially now that I realise I still remember the plot. XD Best story in my account, I don't plan on letting everyone down.
AthrunCagallimadness- (2) 'girliest shriek ever heard from Seriso's throat'. ...I think that would constitute as freaking out, wouldn't you? XD Hey, maybe Krad isn't so evil after all. ponder Question is though: Is he being honest/shrugs/ No, Seriso doesn't know yet. She is quite clueless about everything. hehe I'm so mean. (3) Once again, I apologise for the late update. lol And yeah, Krad is a bit of an asshat. But you get to think now: Is he really all that evil? Or is he really an ally? I do have to say though, Seriso has to get a clue before she can follow anyone's footsteps. XD She's probably most like Risa right now. /shudder/ Dear god, what have I done? j/k
Schizo and Proud- (2) Duh duh duh DUM! I've updated! How about that one? I told you you inspired me. XD And I have to say I'm quite disappointed. You weren't testy enough with me. XDDD Then again, a whole nother chapter had been up after this review so...maybe the offer was up? No, no shounen-ai, but plenty of little inuendos that will only show up on a shounen-ai fan's radar. XDD (3) The beta position is still yours after all this time if you so choose to accept it. XD Although, at least with this chapter you got to be as surprised as everyone else. XD
The Edge of an Oath- (2) lmao I actually had an idea that would make that kind of work. But shhh...not gonna tell. X3
kittenoftime- (2) :3 It is a bit creepy, to think of a guy like that...like THAT. XDD lol Thank you for the compliment.
Redrosemoon- (2) Sorry to keep you waiting I guess. X3 You mean there are more 'girl' themed stories out there/pout/ I wanna see...
Miko102- (2) It was actually a referance to the end of the DNAngel anime. :) I don't really want to spoil it for those who haven't seen it yet though.
RainingHearts- (2/3) :3 And I updated again too. lmao A loooong time after I was expected to. My apologies.
Tsuki no Wish- (2) I'm delighted this is the first DNAngel fic you've read and I apologise that I haven't been updating all that much. Hope you still like this story.
Silent Harlem Angel- (2) Updated, after such a long time. My apologies. :3
Jasmine-san- (2) Question: How will Dark survive as a girl? Answer: ...not very well. lmao
Hittocerebattousai- (3) Whee. Happy you like the plot. :3 Sorry I didn't update as soon as you hoped though. Eheheh...
turtlerad17- (3) Oh you have NO idea how much romantic angst this plot will have. Mwahahahahahaha/cough/ Er...what?
Ki-Ki- (3) I think I may avoid KradxSeriso... .> I don't want her to become a mary-sue or anything. Really. lmao But who knows who she may actually end up with yet. /still hasn't decided/ There are, of course, more OCs to come. So be ready. XD
Dark: You know, despite the shortness of this chapter and the overload of plot and hinted secrets...you sure took a long time.
K: Yeah, what's with that?
Bakura: You forgot all about us!
Mamoru: ...
/sob/ I'm so sorry guys. You kind of just disappeared one day. Thank Steph for calling you back from the abyss!
Muses: Thanks Schizo!
Dark: Anyone up for Mahjong?
Bakura: Hell no! You cheat!
Dark: What?!
K/laughs/ It's good to be back, no?
Mamoru: I concur.
Indeed.
-Hyper Chef
Dark
K
Bakura
Mamoru