Unopened Doors: The Fall of Dalmasca

[hyperion_rising]

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The Fall of Dalmasca

Royal Palace, Rabanaster

The first thing Rasler saw on opening his eyes was the rather large nose of Doctor Fellicks, the Royal Physician. He let out a loud groan that was not entirely caused by physical pain.

Comments

[phoenixblaze]

I'm intriguied. I really like the way this is starting.

My only complaint so far is that the bold white on black really hurts my eyes.

[hyperion_rising]

Thanks :)

As to the layout: Huh. Never considered that. I guess I'll fix it.

What is your icon from, by the way?

[alitaorg]

crowned by the newest! ooh, wonder if he had the hots for her then.

[hyperion_rising]

Probably, but no more than for any other beautiful woman and there would have been no emotional connection.