oh my (super boy); [donghae/kyuhyun]

Oct 01, 2009 00:18

oh my (super boy)
donghae/kyuhyun; pg-13
2,168 words
Donghae meets a potential soulmate at a party. AU partly based on Suju-M's 'Super Girl' MV. Please excuse the almost-porn. :|

It's not hard to imagine this boy twisting, arching and sliding against him. Not at all. )

pairing: donghae/kyuhyun, group: super junior

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aboutl0ve September 30 2009, 22:36:24 UTC
totally not lame. in fact, this was quite the opposite of lame. <33 so cute.

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hyungdeul September 30 2009, 23:58:50 UTC
Such sweet words. ♥ Thank you so much!

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ttangkkoma September 30 2009, 23:02:05 UTC
HELLO THERE CUTE LITTLE PAIRING THAT HAS BEEN SHOVED AT ME BY MY FRIENDS SO MANY TIMES I HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO SORTA LIKE IT

this was a great au and i'm so happy that someone finally saw the party taking place at a dorm. i thought i was the only one that saw it lol

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hyungdeul October 1 2009, 00:02:51 UTC
Kyuhae demands that you like them even more! :D the party at the dorm thing is kinda obvious; it was the first thing that popped into my head after watching super girl.

Thanks so much for reading even if you're still sorta teetering between like and sorta-like. I hope you read for them again! ♥

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miuratenshi October 1 2009, 01:13:53 UTC
This was so cute!

Zhou Mi's eyes go misty and he clasps his hands together in a dead-on imitation of a pre-prepubescent girl. "He's perfect, his dancing is perfect, his butt is perfect -"

LMAO.

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hyungdeul October 1 2009, 02:36:26 UTC
Glad that worked for you! :D Thanks for reading!

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hyungdeul October 1 2009, 02:37:23 UTC
I TOTALLY AGREE! *_* this mv is a gold mine not just for kyuhae, but for the guys, too.

Thank you! ♥

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bunnylla October 1 2009, 03:48:40 UTC
And you call this lame?!

hey. be confident.
I adore you so much because of this.
You are now hooking me up all the way to KyuHae.

Now, stalker Kyu was great!
all the french kissing stuff, and the dancing stuff.

suggestion:
urgh, SEQUEL or just a PART2 is much much wanted.
=)) sort of, more french kissing? and rubbing parts maybe?

btw, i love them drunk! XD
so much to do when you're drunk.

♥♥♥

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hyungdeul October 1 2009, 08:17:20 UTC
Converting non-fans or fence-sitters to Kyuhae is DEFINITELY a confidence-booster like no other!

As for a sequel... hmm. I 'll think about it, though I don't know what's going to happen there at this point. They throw a coming-out party together? idk. :)

Thanks a lot! ♥

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bunnylla October 1 2009, 08:55:19 UTC
well, congratulations on hooking me in. ♥

hmm, idk if it's a good idea, i think you'll have a better on instead.
But if you would not mind... how about writing Kyu's POV while watching Hae dance. and about the party too. whatsoever. :P

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hyungdeul October 1 2009, 12:21:59 UTC
Kyuhyun's POV from pre- to post-party? Not a bad idea at all. I'll get to this after I finish a few of the other ones I'd planned. Thanks a lot for the inspiration! :)

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