fire alarm; [minho/taemin]

Oct 16, 2009 09:32

fire alarm
minho/taemin; pg
1,351 words
Summary: Taemin smokes. Minho reacts. Just a random tidbit of a fic before I'm off to school. Please don't ask what came over when I wrote this. The other boys tend to smother and baby him, and I bet any teenage boy would feel indignant. Just. Cries. Oh Taemin.

Taemin knows a lot of the sunbaenim smoke. )

group: shinee, pairing: minho/taemin

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:| kartons October 16 2009, 01:47:24 UTC
LOL tama ka, magugustuhan ko nga 'to. TINATAMAAN KA BA HABANG SINUSULAT MO 'TO.

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Re: :| hyungdeul October 16 2009, 01:59:58 UTC
i - what. i don't know what you mean :| STFU LOL

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Re: :| kartons October 16 2009, 03:39:09 UTC
....uh. What. *A*

Mahusay!

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coffee_appeal October 16 2009, 02:05:27 UTC
I'm going to be a creep and ask if you're Filipino because of the comment above and two, this is amazing. It's well written :)

I like the whole Taem being independent yet...seconds thoughts on that, haha. Being sheltered isn't always fun. Not always. >_____>;;

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hyungdeul October 16 2009, 02:12:05 UTC
I'm Filipino, yes. :)

Taemin probably doesn't like all the coddling from his hyungs. It's one of the frustrations anyone gets from being the youngest. Another thing is he's on the cusp of adulthood. At sixteen, anybody, especially a teenage boy reared in showbiz, is going to be just a bit rebellious.

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! ♥

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coffee_appeal October 16 2009, 02:26:51 UTC
LOLOLOL. OKAY. I'm sorry if that question was creepy, I couldn't help myself LOL. I'm Filipina too :D LOL. -ignoreignore-

I would say he's just trying to hold back all that feeling, honestly. I worry for all of them. Teens should be having fun, not working 24/7 ;____; It's fun, but on occasion you'd gotta think with the lines under their eyes and fatigued poses they have, they just wanna go to bed.

:) Of course I'd like it...you're a great writer ~ ~ ~

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hyungdeul October 16 2009, 03:50:27 UTC
aaa i'm sorry! ;_; but i think taemin does have the rebellious streak, just extremely well-masked. he's a growing boy, after all.

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hyungdeul October 16 2009, 03:55:44 UTC
no, don't! ;__; i didn't really intend for taemin to appear like a douche or anything. more like... confused and hating the way he's treated too much like a kid.

OT: I'm sure there are a LOT of Filipino lurkers in replay. My friends read shinee fic and are probably even better writers than I am, but they're too busy to post, so. I hope the others come out of hiding soon. :))

OT 2: RINGDINGDONG I LOVE YOUR ICON *_*

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tiggie0307 October 16 2009, 03:17:12 UTC
Taeamin on the sticks at such a young age(even tho I've seen a 11 year old smoke; which creeped me the hell out).. *shakes head* O_O And he got hooked real quick too! But that life(sadly).

Good story.

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hyungdeul October 16 2009, 03:59:05 UTC
when under stress, people get addicted quickly, and i imagine that he is feeling the pressure. there was a passage of time, and tremors signal withdrawal so this implies that taemin doesn't smoke often, but when he does he huffs like the best of 'em.

thanks for reading! :)

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