homecoming; [donghae/kyuhyun]

Oct 18, 2009 21:52

homecoming
donghae/kyuhyun; g/pg
1,359 words
Summary: Snippets of their relationship through Donghae's mother's eyes. Short piece before I move on to finishing the chaptered story. Hope you guys find it to your liking! :)

The first time her youngest son (her precious superstar, her baby) brings someone new home to Mokpo, it isn't who she expects. )

pairing: donghae/kyuhyun, group: super junior

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thundersquall October 18 2009, 14:12:54 UTC
Omg, omg I love this, I love this so much you don't even know, it's GORGEOUS! *screams*

I love how you wrote it from Hae's mother's POV, it's incredibly refreshing. It's lovely to see the development of the KyuHae relationship from her eyes, and how she loves Kyuhyun just because her son does. Such a heartwarming story.

(I was just talking to darleenk about you and we both think you're awesome. 8D And you are; I don't ship KyuHae, but I adore the way you write them. ♥)

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hyungdeul October 18 2009, 21:56:52 UTC
This comment is so lovely. just. dies. Thank you! *flails*

I wanted to try my hand at something different and I didn't want to go down the route of 'so and so member's pov about x and y's relationship' (though that's interesting, too, but still--). I'm incredibly stoked that this worked for you!

(I-I... *flails even more* That's incredibly flattering. Thank you ♥ I wish you'd come to the Kyuhae side, but a girl can only dream :( )

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thundersquall October 19 2009, 00:15:44 UTC
I'm glad you wanted to try something different, it works so well!

(LOL, I do like KyuHae, I may not ship them but I like them. In any case, YeWook owns my soul and I don't think they'd be willing to hand it over. xD)

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darleenk October 18 2009, 14:16:45 UTC
Your baby Kyuhyun descriptions were perfect. ♥ And I seriously love Hae's mum in this, she's a major sweetie, without being too un-Korean, if you get me. Urgh, YOU. You make me happy. -blows hearts at you-

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hyungdeul October 18 2009, 22:01:02 UTC
AAA Why are you always so sweet and making me blush jhdajkh THANK YOU! ♥

That was one of my biggest fears - that she'd look like a non-Korean mom or sth, but I'm glad it still worked out.

a million ♥ back at you!!

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lil_aqua_chic October 18 2009, 14:21:42 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw Kyuhae <333

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hyungdeul October 18 2009, 22:01:51 UTC
D'aaaaaw thank you! :)

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shegeki October 18 2009, 14:24:20 UTC
Hae's mother must be like this. It so pleasing to hear the story from his Mom. I love the motherly affection for both Kyu and Hae. It's just so adorable!

Hae's mother seems to be a little like Hae himself; playful, kind and trusting.

I loved the Kyuhae too. If you write Kyuhae like this, it isn't called spamming anymore. :DDDDDDDD &heart;

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hyungdeul October 18 2009, 22:03:25 UTC
You got exactly what I was going for with Hae's mom. I truly do hope she is somewhat like this, too ;__;

Thank you! ♥

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xkeirafanx October 18 2009, 14:30:58 UTC
woooooooooooow, sweet
I think KyuHae isn't that shipped, but they are cute nonetheless.
What am I talking...they ARE cute. A very nice story.

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hyungdeul October 18 2009, 22:04:03 UTC
You're right, it isn't that shipped. I hope the situation turns around soon T_T

Thank you! :)

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