the heartbreak that never happened; [yehsung/ryeowook]

Oct 22, 2009 20:55

the heartbreak that never happened
yehsung/ryeowook, ninja!kyuhae, pg-13
2,117 words
Summary: Ryeowook marries Yehsung in Canada, but not without some internal conflict first. So this is all thanks to the wonderful thundersquall, without whose persuasion this would never have materialized. Please direct all complaints for the cheesiest Yehwook ever to her lj ( Read more... )

pairing: yehsung/ryeowook, group: super junior

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thundersquall October 22 2009, 13:12:46 UTC
I LOVE YOU AND I AM SECURING THIS SPOT. =D

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thundersquall October 22 2009, 14:12:16 UTC
OMG WHY ARE YOU MADE OF SUCH AWESOME?! *tackleglomps*

Omg, I'm still amazed at how fast you write, both for this and the previous YeWook. I love this. I miss cute!fluffy!YeWook so much and you wrote them gorgeously. ♥

I totally enjoyed the cameos from the other members (I SEE YOUR KYUHAE BIAS), and I loved how you started out with Ryeowook's first loves, before he gets to Yesung. The members' antics made me crack up, and so did Ryeowook's mum! Omg, so much love for her. <33333

And then the ending. THE ENDING. When Ryeowook is twenty-seven, with a ring on his neck and Yehsung's lips on his hand, he falls in love for the fourth time. And he realizes that he loves him even when he's too tired to kiss him, or too angry to give in to the magnet of his arms. He loves him even when the world watches with vicious eyes and he can't tell him so. He loves him when he tells it anyway, in the dead of the night, in the glare of the afternoon sun, in front of a sea of blue and roaring screams. OH DEAR GOD, MY HEART, IT OVERFLOWS WITH THE LOVE. ( ... )

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hyungdeul October 23 2009, 00:05:35 UTC
SHEENA, YOU. YOU MAKE ME BLUSH LIKE MAD. ♥ *pounces*

I have too much time on my hands at the moment because we're on our semestral break. Give or take two weeks and I might disappear off the face of the earth for a while T_T

OH MY BIAS, IT OVERWHELMS. I'm sorry, they just have to be inserted there, didn't they? 8D I had fun thinking of what the other members could possibly do to ruin the wedding, but I decided in the end that when it's time for the actual thing, they deliver and they did. I love this group sfm ♥

AAA YEHWOOK LOVE. Idk I was watching all the videos and the pictures you pimped in your lj and the ending just came naturally. SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE, YOUR INFLUENCE, IT CROSSES THE REALM OF THE SUBCONSCIOUS.

I shall try to write more while I have the time. And I would LOVE it if you wrote Kyuhae, but I understand that RL can be a bitch akdjakljd I'M WAITING FOR IT PATIENTLY! ♥

I LOVE YOU TOO, SHEENA ♥ x infinity to you

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happytgt October 22 2009, 13:21:53 UTC
EEEEEK, YOU WRITE YEWOOK REAL AWESOME. (wait you write everything awesome) and I spot ninja!kyuhae :3

I loved the phone call between Ryeowook and his mum, I giggled and then I laughed silently and then I LOL-ed when Ryeowook didn't invite his mum. I love the small details you put into your writing that make me smile, even the littlelest things, like
Ryeowook ignores the loud sobs coming from the pews on the left (his mother, Yehsung's mother and possibly Siwon or Zhou Mi)

Reaaaaaaally, awesome, write moar Yewook! And Kyuhae :)

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hyungdeul October 23 2009, 00:10:59 UTC
THANK YOU, BB ♥! Ohoho, Kyuhae creeps into practically everything I write now, it's a bad habit (that I don't exactly want to get rid of since the world needs more of it 8D).

Wook's phonecall to his mom - ngl, it was probably my favorite part, too. As for the details, well, it's one of the things I really pay attention to in the fics I read, so I tried to put a little bit as well here even if it's a short piece. Glad it worked for you! ♥

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giinnnzz October 22 2009, 13:22:51 UTC
HEIOFYEWHFIGEWBFUEWFGYEWILJGWHOPFIEWYHFIEWLHEWLHGEOWIGHWILHEWL
SUCH A LOVELY AND WARM MARRIAGE!!! I WANNA SEE THEIR BABY SOON!!
AND LOL AT WOOKIE'S MOM!!SHE WANT HANNIE~~ >W<
MWAHAHAH~~ *HUGS* OKAY BABY!! I LOVE YOUR YEWOOK!!! ^W^

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hyungdeul October 23 2009, 00:13:12 UTC
Keysmashing incoherence is good, I assume? :D Ahaha, thank you! :)

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ddangkkoma October 22 2009, 13:24:06 UTC
OMG THIS WAS AMAZINGGGGG. MARRIED YEWOOK IS NOTHING SHORT OF AMAZING AND GENIUS AND YOU EXECUTED IT SO WONDERFULLY. they're so adorable together and gosh married so young LMAOOO

yesung was so adorable as his usual fail self. i was expecting something to happen to him at the wedding and the tripping just made me go awwww at how adorable that must seem.

AND NO LIE I LOVE RYEOWOOK'S MOTHER IN THIS. SHE IS ALL SORTS OF ADORABLE AND FUNNY AND GOSH I WANT TO HUG HER AND EAT HER DISHES AND BE LIKE LET ME HELP YOU LOVE YOUR SON'S HUBBY =D

i'm so happy now. i needed the happy boost now that i'm going into fail a test lol

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hyungdeul October 23 2009, 00:18:22 UTC
I imagine married!yehwook will have such a sweet life together. They really are an adorable pair *_*

Aaw poor Yehsung, he just can't seem to win even on the happiest day of his life. Or he already has, since the biggest prize of his life is Ryeowook (d'aaaw cue the cheese) ♥.

I'm glad this gave you a boost! And no, don't think of failing that test! \o/

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jhengchie October 22 2009, 13:49:31 UTC
nice one..
i love yewook..

and i love the story..
and the mum..
hannie..
she must have fallen for him..

love yewook too much..

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hyungdeul October 23 2009, 00:20:16 UTC
thank you, i'm glad you liked it! :)

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