the first, the last, and everything in between; [donghae/kyuhyun]

[hyungdeul]

the first, the last, and everything in between
donghae/kyuhyun; nc-17
1,466 words
Summary: Donghae and Kyuhyun do it in the back of the company limousine. So I actually started this sometime ago and only finished it now, after being inspired by thundersquall and loveisonthemenu, though on the hotness scale, this really doesn't measure up to their porn. :| I TRIED, GAIS.

Comments

[naegative]

Donghae is Kyuhyun's first crush, his first love, his first time. And though he may look to the other way sometimes, it's Donghae, always Donghae, that he comes back to. It's Donghae who he sings to, who he loves and fucks and gets fucked by and hopes for and dreams with. He always knew he could sink into his touch and die there. So he does, and the world is none the wiser.

AAAAAAA fave lines! Great job! \o/ ♥

[hyungdeul]

Thanks, bb ♥ AND YOUR ICON IS FFFF LOVE FOREVER

[cutepear]

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Damn hot!

[hyungdeul]

kjdklsjfa thanks for saying so! *_*

[thundersquall]

OMG CORINNE TOP!HAE, SOBBING SO HARD, DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE TOP!HAE?!

ALSO, CRYING FOREVER, OBVIOUSLY YOU'RE AN INCREDIBLY TALENTED WRITER BECAUSE YOU DEFINITELY CAN WRITE MORE THAN JUST BEAUTIFUL WORDS. YOU WRITE HOT, SEXY, GUH-INDUCING PORN TOO.

KSDJFHJSGDK KYUHYUN TELLING HAE WHAT TO DO, THAT IS JUST ABOUT THE HOTTEST THING EVER. ;___;

his fingertips carving red crescents on Donghae's naked back OH GOD THIS. I HAVE THE BIGGEST KINK FOR MARKING, AND THE IMAGERY HERE IS UTTERLY PERFECT. ;___;

AND AND AND EVEN THOUGH IT'S PORN YOU STILL MANAGE TO MAKE IT CRAZY HOT AND DIRTY ENOUGH WITHOUT BEING OVERLY FILTHY AND STILL RETAINING THE SENSUALITY unlike me; I write nothing but pure filth SO OMG CORINNE. I IMPLORE YOU. TEACH ME. *falls to knees, begs*

jsdgfkjhsgakhj Can you tell I loved this?!

[hyungdeul]

SHEENA ♥ cries forever top!hae is actually my favorite thing ever to read in suju porn akldjlkjsd. it's just not done often enough! :( also kyu would totally top from the bottom, hence the instructions. XD

MARKING IS PERSONAL KINK, TOO! *_*

AND WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT, GIRL. YOUR PORN IS SIZZLING HOT AND THIS CANNOT EVER MEASURE UP SO YOU TEACH ME!

i love youuu ♥

[thundersquall]

ksjdaghfsa I agree, more people should write top!Hae. Especially when he's like this ;___; GUH, so hot. And I love bottom!Kyu too, so jhgfshgdsja this is perfect! 8DDDD I wrote top!Hae once, but it's KiHae, and I have no idea if you'd go for that pairing.

CRYING, NO, I NEED YOU TO TEACH ME HOW TO WRITE PORN SENSUOUSLY. MINE IS LIKE BANG AND IN-YOUR-FACE AND IT GOES OVERBOARD. Talking about that, I need you to teach me how to write pretty too. ♥

You should write YeWook porn next *evil laugh*

[hyungdeul]

thank you! lol that relay talk ttly proved how hard kyu's boycrush on hae really is. :)

[tiggie0307]

This is WIN

Top!Donghae will always be win for me! XD

I have a few fic ideas that have yet to leave my notebook, so I understand.

[hyungdeul]

Top!Hae is the hottest thing ever, seriously! *_*

Thanks for reading!