Comments | hyungdeul: white walls; [onew/jonghyun]

hyungdeul

white walls; [onew/jonghyun]

Nov 21, 2009 00:57

white walls
onew/jonghyun; pg-13
2,839 words
Summary: Jonghyun loses his voice, and other faculties. (WARNING: there is death and general fuckery ahead). For pinkweather. I'm sorry, this just turned out... weird. :\

( Jonghyun loses his voice midway through singing in the shower. )

group: shinee, pairing: onew/jonghyun

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naegative November 20 2009, 20:06:04 UTC

:( You are so This is so fucked up, lol. A++ for being rly creepy and morbid. I think you managed to achieve the feel that you wanted for this fic so GJ :Db

WRITE MOAR onkey SHINEE FIC

:( naegative November 20 2009, 23:56:50 UTC

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Re: :( hoyah November 21 2009, 23:44:47 UTC

no idea what's going on here, but it looks hilarious

Re: :( hyungdeul November 21 2009, 23:50:42 UTC

thanks for the gif, bb. :)) and okay okay i'm getting to the onkey!

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hyungdeul November 21 2009, 23:51:45 UTC

What are YOU talking about? I LOVE YOUR CRACK, I AM A TOTAL FANGIRL. Please, there needs to be more insanely good funny fics in fandom, and you're like, my go-to person for that. ♥

dubufallin November 20 2009, 22:59:43 UTC

I'm just gonna leave a spot for me to spazz on later :D

dubufallin November 20 2009, 23:18:30 UTC

Firstly..

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hyungdeul November 21 2009, 23:55:33 UTC

i can't help but feel that you came back to this later and went from ':D yay fic!!' to 'D: wtf!!'.

He is changing and mutating and digging half-moons on his palm and fucking what is happening.
i know this line can get confusing but it's purely metaphorical - i just wanted to point out that jjong realizing that he couldn't speak or sing is slowly changing him. his voice is his selling point, his essence as an idol or even as a person. so to not have that is to rip away what makes him him, thus the 'change.'

and aiiee how cute is the puppy!picture? *_* thank you for reading! ♥

bunni102 November 20 2009, 23:06:36 UTC

Omg, did u just kill Jinki? >.<
I love it yet its sill creepy at the end when Jjong decided to go all psycho and kill jinki off.
Gosh, jjong why did you have to go all psycho and kill jinki, I mean yeah I'm still confuse because of the ending, but after re reading it I finally understood it.
I need to mem this fic. I love it so much!

hyungdeul November 21 2009, 23:57:38 UTC

...yes, i did? D: /bricked

lol yes, it is kinda confusing at first read, but i'm happy it merited a re-read in your book. and mem-ing? *_* wow, thank you! ♥

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hyungdeul November 22 2009, 00:02:27 UTC

hi, you. i'm sorry if it made you uncomfortable. :( a-and i like reading my fluff and romance and porn, too! idk what came over me, honestly. wait no, yes i did, someone persuaded me to write this kind of thing /pointed stare at pinkweather. but. lemme say that you weren't completely horrified enough to not comment, and so that still makes me smile. :D

if you noticed, the first mention of white walls came directly after he realizes that he can't talk at all. and the white walls was meant as a symbol for many things in the fic - being voiceless, the 'shadows' & the change in jonghyun.

:'( /hands tissues. i'll try to come up with something happier next time!

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hyungdeul November 22 2009, 06:02:33 UTC

i write more porn and fluff for it to be healthy, tbh! ask the suju people, they must be getting tired of all my bad sex and fluff by now. :)) but yes, shinee is a really happy group and i should be writing something infinitely happier and less horrifying.

that happy jongyu is going to happen, don't worry! ♥

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