Very nicely done. There are some laugh out loud moments here (for example: "Jesus Christ, Pete!" snapped the dark priest. "It doesn't work unless all of us say all our lines!"), and I especially loved your ending :)
Meaning, is this your canon? Your world? What else does it encompass and is this the character you write long for? The fact that her winning bingo number is your username...are all the winning bingo numbers i-17? Is there a point to the bingo cards?
Yes, it is my canon, and my world. With the exception of Week 1, this season has been devoted to expanding a universe I'd like to write a novel within. It goes all the way back to the 1940s to modern day, and is on the verge of crossing over into itself soon (Moreso than it has already--for example, the Victor in " Build a Better Mousetrap" is the same Victor who arrives in " Yes, And", separated by about a dozen years.)
Because I crosspost to my Wordpress blog, tags will take you there.
The bingo card is a coincidence--I love Evil Villain Cliches as much as Rafaela, but I also love to make fun of them--and I just took the opportunity for some high-quality narcissism.
I don't know if I'd call it eye-rolling. She gets a bit of a kick out of the finer details of her job, even as she vanquishes some of those same details.
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True story: I actually knew one. He was a douche.
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Because I crosspost to my Wordpress blog, tags will take you there.
The bingo card is a coincidence--I love Evil Villain Cliches as much as Rafaela, but I also love to make fun of them--and I just took the opportunity for some high-quality narcissism.
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