LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 17: Scare Quotes

[i_17bingo]

Comments

[whipchick]

Your opening really grabbed me! And the name Glennis - that's my mother's name, and I don't hear about too many Glennises. Rafaela is such a great character!

[i_17bingo]

I will have to use more Glennises in the future, then. But the next time I need an old-timey name, Gladys is in front of the line.

[watching_ships]

Really great dialogue. You've got a knack for it! Moves so quickly. Great work here.

[i_17bingo]

Dialogue is my favorite, so thanks for the kind words.

[mamas_minion]

I think Jason should reconsider being a skepitc, and become a conspiracy theorist than nothign he believed in would be real. This is a great and humourus piece.

[i_17bingo]

That's a great idea! Except the other conspiracy theorists wouldn't believe him anyway.

[jem0000000]

Oh, dear. Drive-by rescuer... if it weren't for the alternative, they might prefer not to have met her. The confusion is palpable. :)

[i_17bingo]

I'm pretty sure after the melon heads attack, confusion is the only rational response.

[eska818]

The dialogue in this scene is just beyond superb. I was laughing so much at poor Jason and his angry, angry Amy. Really great job pulling me in, and then keeping it strong all the way through. :)

[i_17bingo]

Can you blame Amy for being so angry, though?

[eska818]

I really can't. I mean... there are melon heads after them!