I really enjoyed that this scene stood well on its own, even if you haven't read the other entries (or perhaps don't remember them too well). I was also dying of laughter at the descriptions of the characters/people in the beginning. You really aced this scene, it unfolded at a great pace, and the dialogue was hilarious.
(One minor thing of note - in the first sentence, should it be Elven Archer? I noticed it was corrected later in the scene)
Honestly, I wasn't paying attention, and I wasn't sure until now the difference between "Elvin" and "Elven"; I'm not really into high fantasy and haven't done D&D in over twenty years.
I'm relieved to hear that the standalone aspect worked. The story of Gina is a lot less episodic than the stories of Rafaela, but the last thing I want to do is confuse new/forgetful readers.
I loved this! There was so much going on, and I especially loved the descriptive names of the characters. I didn't expect the end, either, which is also good, and I couldn't find an apostrophe out of place. A winner all around.
I had written a little bit about why she chose to be a warrior dwarf as opposed to a mage herself ("Because dismembering creatures with a disproportionately large ax is much more satisfying."), but I cut it for length.
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(One minor thing of note - in the first sentence, should it be Elven Archer? I noticed it was corrected later in the scene)
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I'm relieved to hear that the standalone aspect worked. The story of Gina is a lot less episodic than the stories of Rafaela, but the last thing I want to do is confuse new/forgetful readers.
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That puts a whole different spin on what seems like an average, tabletop RPG-- when you're from Gina's background.
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And this story was right up there.
Excellent read
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