LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 23: The Fiction of the Fix

[i_17bingo]

Comments

[waltzmatildah]

You are the VERY BEST at dialogue. FYI.

This was fantastic.

[i_17bingo]

You are making me blush. Thank you.

[karmasoup]

I love the idea of a psychic card - I can see that being incredibly useful here in the states. I do find it amusing that Gina only saw it for what it is, and, of course, I LOVE that Rafaela is a Doctor Who fan, though I have a hard time imagining when she finds time to watch TV. Perhaps she streams it on her smart phone while waiting for a taxi in random towns. Also, correct the "wrong" with Gerard is just priceless! ;)

[i_17bingo]

Gerard is a sweetheart; I haven't any opportunities to write him out, but

The Dr. Who reference is a subtle confession that he's an inspiration for her (but don't tell anyone)

[kathrynrose]

whipchick is currently in Qatar. Maybe a bit of psychic connection happening there. :)

[i_17bingo]

Well, I currently live in Qatar, but was in the United States at the time of this writing, and thus missed out on a possible lunch.

[whipchick]

Love the shape-shifting card and the indeterminate pudding :)

[i_17bingo]

Even chocolate cafeteria pudding tastes like bananas and/or vanilla. I had no idea pudding could actually be tasty because of all of my terrible experiences.

[shimmerdream]

Great story and I loved the Doctor Who reference at the beginning.

[i_17bingo]

Is it any surprise that she's a fan?