LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 29: Gauntlet

[i_17bingo]

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[tsuki_no_bara]

what happened the seventh time?? this was thoroughly enjoyable! i kept trying to figure out what was going on. i wasn't quite expecting susan to be possessed by dead people, but i like it.

>>Gina sighed. "It's supposed to be a convincing falsification of a driver's license, identifying me as a woman of twenty-five years." She took it back with a frown. "Rafaela told me she got the idea from a TV show."

"Two actually. But one was a comic book first."<<

i know they just did this on constantine on friday, but what's the other show? dr who?

[i_17bingo]

Yeah, Dr. Who. Inspired by the Doctor, I came up with the playing card idea, and then Constantine did it, like, a couple of weeks later. I have no idea if he did it in the comics (I've only read about half of Hellblazer).

[witches]

:D i really enjoyed this and could picture Gina and Susan so clearly! <3

[i_17bingo]

Thanks! Their relationship is very important to me... and to the story.

P.S. Is that Kate Bishop in your icon?

[witches]

:3 i'm really loving reading about them <3

it is kate bishop! :3

[i_17bingo]

Hawk Guy for the win!

[eska818]

"Magic it or something."

lols. This is most assuredly something I would, and have said many times! XD

This was slightly confusing, but you wrapped it up nicely by the end! I enjoy your dialogue - witty, amusing, and engaging. :)

[i_17bingo]

I am, frankly, annoyed that Gina couldn't just magic it.

[fodschwazzle]

I agree on the confusion aspect but admit that it drove me onward. Gina's revelations are quite enticing, leaving enough unsaid that I want to follow her thought process.

And yes, I did run every one of those phrases through Google Translate and got the gist of what was going on there.

[i_17bingo]

Well, it was supposed to be a little confusing, given that Gina was a little confused, but hopefully not enough to kill the story.

[theun4givables]

I like that it took Gina a while to catch on to what was happening to her friend -- and that for a while, she played it for her own amusement. :) Sounds like something Gina would do!

[i_17bingo]

She's still not quite accustomed to dealing with humans...