LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 33: Musth

[i_17bingo]

Comments

[suesniffsglue]

Ah, tricksy incubi! The feelings in this piece were tangible; the passion, the confusion, the frustration--really well done!

[i_17bingo]

Exasperation is probably my favorite emotion to write, really.

[jexia]

Hee, this was fun.

[i_17bingo]

It was--not surprisingly--a lot of fun to write.

[bleodswean]

Ah-ha!!! In any other storyteller's piece...I would have had to go with it all being a dream...but of course in YOUR work I began teasing at the knot early on.....I hadn't thought of an incubus/sucubus!!! Funny stuff here! And slightly erotic....

[i_17bingo]

Only slightly erotic?

Thank you for the uplift, and letting me know a knot gets teased. That is very, very encouraging.

[halfshellvenus]

Hahahaha! Now I know why Gina couldn't quite snap herself out of that dream, and why all of her friends were plagued with similar problems.

I guess it's too much work for the succubi/incubi to seduce from scratch-- why not take the easy route and masquerade as someone else?

[i_17bingo]

I'm sure too that preexisting lust tastes so much sweeter.

[fodschwazzle]

It certainly did get awkward. I had to read through the last sequence a couple of times to get the name game that was happening there, but it all clicked into place eventually. I like that Gina decides to send them out rather than do something more aggressive. That says a lot about the character dynamics, I think.

[i_17bingo]

It's not a popular position these days--particularly in American political culture--but negotiation helps everyone, even if it just keeps people (and others) from being hurt.