LJ Idol, Season 10 Second Chance, Week 3: Getting to Carnegie Hall

[i_17bingo]

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[bleodswean]

A 12-year old Rafaela! And a ghost-conjuring sidekick! You gotta love this! Sorry they are meeting in mental hospital. (Have you been watching Legion?!) Nice job keeping this "in tune" and moving along. It had a good pace. I was surprised that the ghost turned out to be malevolent but I suppose I shouldn't have been!

This was perfect - I don't know what the collective noun for a bunch of ghosts is. Spook? A spook of ghosts? That could work.

[i_17bingo]

The mental hospital is an important part of Rafaela's past. I wish there was a way with the format of LJ Idol that I could share her history. Serving it up in these little bites will have to do, I guess.

[eternal_ot]

Spooky Good :) The setting was good and I didn't expect the 12 yrs old to be Rafaela and it was a pleasant surprise. I have a voice for her in my head and switched to it instantly after reading her name :P Does that make me one of them, I don't know. But that makes you a great writer ;)

[i_17bingo]

That doesn't make you crazy, it makes you a fan. And it is so awesome to have a fan.

[i_17bingo]

Stick around, because I am going to write about her as long as I'm in this competition.

[banana_galaxy]

This was sweet. I liked the idea of Miranda's singing activating the ghost, too. Nice contrast between the two characters.

[i_17bingo]

I didn't really think of them as contrasting, but now that you mention it, they are really different.

[lolaslaughter]

This gave me goosebumps!! I loved it so much!! I would definitely be interested in learning more about both of the girls' stories!! I really hope I get to know them better!! 😁😁

[i_17bingo]

You'll definitely be reading more about Rafaela in different stages of her life, so long as I get to stay in Idol. I don't know about Miranda. I may come back to her if inspiration strikes.