LJ Idol, Season 10 Week 16: Thunderclap

[i_17bingo]

Comments

[beeker121]

Maybe old is just the title for skinwalker? though i can't quite tell which piece annoys Victor more.

This was fun, cowboys and indians with a spectral touch.

[i_17bingo]

It depends on what time of day it is which one annoys him the most. Because thirty is not old, but on the other hand skinwalkers are very bad.

[shadowwolf13]

I'd love to read more of this. :D

[i_17bingo]

If I have more ideas and if I'm still in the competition, there will be more.

[bleodswean]

This piece really utilizes your hip, smart-alecky, whipcracking control of dialogue! It's fun and fast and holds together perfectly! This had me grinning outloud -

“In my book it does.”

“Your book is wrong,” he retorted.

[i_17bingo]

You know how much I love my dialogue. Thanks!

[marlawentmad]

Oh, this is wonderful! I could follow this character around through an entire novel. I love the old world magic feel in the middle of modern dialogue.

[i_17bingo]

Thanks! I don't know if I have a whole Victor Chee novel in me, but if I'm still in the contest after a few more rounds, I may have another story.

[swirlsofblue]

Fun story

[i_17bingo]

Thanks!