I've been fairly mentally detached the last few days and been writing quite a bit. Considering that seems to be the least abstract of my current collection plus it has a rhyming scheme (not that I'm particularly proud of rhyming words like cold and old) I was at least somewhat pleased with it enough to share.
I don't normally have the balls to post my poetry so I just save it on the off chance that it probably sucks (I'm a pretty harsh judge of my own work, though).
Well, I'm telling you right now that I think you have amazing potential. I mean... I read those words one time, and I had goosebumps all over. It's a very powerful poem, and I would be thrilled if you posted more, and make a routine out of it. After reading that one, I can only imagine what you have saved up.
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I don't normally have the balls to post my poetry so I just save it on the off chance that it probably sucks (I'm a pretty harsh judge of my own work, though).
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