My rebuttal (I think I just had a Heart Attack) Pt. 1

[i_am_danger]

Love is an unexact science.
Formulas, Equations: Formulaic
Quick Calculations
of sights and sounds
on Chemicals and emotions
Yes, Love is Formulaic....

And all I want to know is do I carry the 3?
(because I always mess it up)

Comments

[indirectpopcorn]

your rebuttal?? for what?

[i_am_danger]

to love on the whole.

Plus, your poem is all cool and happy.

I'm in the current state where it's not all happy.

so I had to throw out an emo-type of poemy thing.

with a humor twist at the end.

(yours was better)

[indirectpopcorn]

nah, mine wasn't all that great. why the not all happiness? (do you have internet at your house??)

[i_am_danger]

ACTUALLY, I'M TOTALLY HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!![Which is why the need for the caps].

And no, sadly there is no internet at my house [yet]. I haven't had time to finish moving in.

So, I live my internet life at work [on breaks]

.....for now.