I have never ever read a Roslin/Cain fic before. And I didn't know what to expect. But crap this was hot! I hope you will keep answering dares. Also, from your little intro, I was expecting something crack-ish. This was actually not crack-ish at all and very well written.
Secondly, I've been reading kat's AU, but am still a few chapters behind. So instead of reading the original scene first, I did the opposite. This should recolour the experience when I finally get to Epoch ch 2. LOL
Again, very nice and insanely hot. (So wrong, yet so right *giggle*)
That's okay, I'd never ever written one before. Nor had I ever expected to.
I'm glad you liked it. I just couldn't get over the idea that the awesome drama Kat was cooking up would just be so much awesomer if they had once went THERE (and hotly!). Good to know I didn't embarrass myself with my little femslash experiment. :)
While Kat didn't go there, you did and you certainly achieved the 'hotly'! And yup, your little femslash experiment was a success in my honest opinion. I suspect I shall revisit this fic in the future.
“Giving up already?” Helena taunted.
“Not likely,” Laura protested as she quickly climbed into her friend’s lap, straddling her before lifting the bottle of alcohol to pound down another shot.
To me, this is the part that propelled the hotness into the stratosphere.
LOL! You cave as easily as I take dares! I'm glad you liked it. But seriously, it's not that hard to make Laura!sex hot, because I mean it's Laura!sex. But I promise to write some good A/R frakking soon to make sure Bill gets a turn. That make you feel better?
I'm just relieved you don't want to kick my ass. (I purposely didn't post this to any place public in case you did.) But see how easy it was to go there. I didn't even really change all that much of your scene and dialogue, just a little *ahem* tweak in the middle.
And it's canon in my mind. Yep. They so did it. And Cain is so a woman scorned, well now really scorned! Can't wait to see how much damage she does before she gets capped.
Thank you for letting me do this with your awesome story. It was fun. Feel free to call on me to write girly!bits for you anytime! :D
I had out the pompoms and was cheering you on to write this. That's why I raided xmaidelx's Photobucket to post that rainbow of smut!teasing.
I probably could have written it, but I can't wrap my legs brain around the mechanics. You would think it would be like "Take hot. Apply to self. Double it."
That will be the last need of girly!bits for the entire story, alas. Don't let me stop you from smutting up other things ;)
I haven't read it, I am just sharing. No need to be so rude. I commented just because I always comment- my way of showing the user that I pay attention to his/her stuff. If you don't appreciate it, I won't comment anymore. whatever.
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I have never ever read a Roslin/Cain fic before. And I didn't know what to expect. But crap this was hot! I hope you will keep answering dares. Also, from your little intro, I was expecting something crack-ish. This was actually not crack-ish at all and very well written.
Secondly, I've been reading kat's AU, but am still a few chapters behind. So instead of reading the original scene first, I did the opposite. This should recolour the experience when I finally get to Epoch ch 2. LOL
Again, very nice and insanely hot. (So wrong, yet so right *giggle*)
Thanks for posting this.
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That's okay, I'd never ever written one before. Nor had I ever expected to.
I'm glad you liked it. I just couldn't get over the idea that the awesome drama Kat was cooking up would just be so much awesomer if they had once went THERE (and hotly!). Good to know I didn't embarrass myself with my little femslash experiment. :)
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“Giving up already?” Helena taunted.
“Not likely,” Laura protested as she quickly climbed into her friend’s lap, straddling her before lifting the bottle of alcohol to pound down another shot.
To me, this is the part that propelled the hotness into the stratosphere.
Bravo. ;-)
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And I could watch your icon all day. *sighs*
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I still feel like I should scrub my brain out with soap though. Damn you and your persuasive awesomeness.
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In the way Laura loves Cain in my version. Maybe this is canon now. Yep.
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I'm just relieved you don't want to kick my ass. (I purposely didn't post this to any place public in case you did.) But see how easy it was to go there. I didn't even really change all that much of your scene and dialogue, just a little *ahem* tweak in the middle.
And it's canon in my mind. Yep. They so did it. And Cain is so a woman scorned, well now really scorned! Can't wait to see how much damage she does before she gets capped.
Thank you for letting me do this with your awesome story. It was fun. Feel free to call on me to write girly!bits for you anytime! :D
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I probably could have written it, but I can't wrap my legs brain around the mechanics. You would think it would be like "Take hot. Apply to self. Double it."
That will be the last need of girly!bits for the entire story, alas. Don't let me stop you from smutting up other things ;)
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