Hurricane Katrina!

[i_die_witout_u]

alright...so my mom and i got this great idea to write a story for the B'ham news since my mom works with the media ALL day and writes and stuff...its a 15 year olds point of veiw on Hurricane Katrina...take some time to read this and tell me what you think...i wrote it and we are sending it in tommorrow

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[uh_oh_its_e]

Girl Its BeaUtIful..
Tear
Great Writer

[i_die_witout_u]

thanks!!

[xoinlovewithyou]

yess very touching i went to new orleans year before last on a mission trip and all i can think about right now are the women and children at the st. bernard housing projects that are probably under water right now .. and the homeless in jackson square .. and the kids at the battered and abused shelter!! it makes me want to go down there to make sure they are okayy!! ♥ you lauren!!

[i_die_witout_u]

thanks...

LAUREN ! I

[anonymous]

heyy dear ! i decided that i like it a good bit yeah !!! bravos to ya mate ! <33 amy

Re: LAUREN ! I

[i_die_witout_u]

thanks amy..ur a doll!!
haha!!

[softbal_whore3]

me like muchO! its really good and touching it really describes it will im glad u wrote it!!

[i_die_witout_u]

gracias!!

[softbal_whore3]

de nada

[volleybabe787]

i like it.. its awesogood but i wouldnt put "big deal" or "Since last summer I have heard of hurricanes but never really..." cuz it sounds like uve never heard of a hurricane before.

just some suggestions

oh man that made me sad. my friends live in LA and their house is fucked. hope all the ppl u no r ok.... < 3 < 3