poop

[i_heart_tools]

ok so i wrote this last night...

***Thoughts mean nothing, only the piercing darkness is real.
This echos in my heart, hollow enough to leave a scar.
Eyes taint my perception with only truth, truth that too easily glides down to meet its dispair.
Hope is buried with the smile that would have lasted forever.***

lemme know what you think...

p.s. i need

Comments

[ginny_potter21]

Jeanette, its really good.
I didn't know you wrote poetry!

[i_heart_tools]

haha i dont...i just had a lot of emotions to express at the time and that's how it came out!

i wish i could write more

Ya

[anonymous]

Its good, but something must really be troubling u..., i hope whatever it is, works out for the best.

Eric

[maliceinwdrland]

I like that! It's deep...

[i_heart_tools]

yeah it was from the murky deapths...and that means a lot from Ms. English herself! (bows poiltely)

<33

ya

[maliceinwdrland]

lol Ms. English hahahaha.