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Sep 16, 2005 20:08

in my early days-
i used to breathe in and out
then they both collapsed

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live4dreams September 17 2005, 16:56:20 UTC
i love you

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i_hide_well September 18 2005, 07:10:44 UTC
i love you as well
do you like haikus?
i certainly do
they are so creative
yet so challenging
the structure is ingenious in its simplicity
the subtle meanings are meant to be translated by our hearts and minds
not by the words
its whats underneath them
you have to delve into the emotions of the poem
thats the key...
thats love

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