LJ Idol Exhibit B: Week 0: Introductions

[i_id]

One possible introduction for shanns_ljidolShann is one of those people who you meet on a bus, when the hour is so late and the road has been so long that you aren't entirely sure you're awake. Conversation passes with the same effortless slipping as the yellow stripes in the road, topics like the peaks and swoops of power lines and laughter like the headlights

Comments

[shanns_ljidol]

I love this!

[medleymisty]

Awww, this was a totally awesome description of a setting and an interaction. Lovely imagery. :)

[jennickels]

Absolutely perfect. Love it.

[whipchick]

I really enjoyed the flow of consciousness in the middle paragraph, how specific those images are, and the description of the regret being what's remembered.

[halfshellvenus]

What a terrific little scene you've captured here. I like the feeling that companionship will form, almost instantly, and the lasting feeling will be that it would never have been long enough.