LJ Idol Exhibit B: Week 1: Intersections. I'm writing with mezzogiorno

[i_id]

He was still warm. Clara sat still, so still, holding his hand. The machines were quiet beside her, their presence unwelcome and somehow still intrusive, the slow flicker of an orange stand-by light as garish in the corner of her eye as a police-car's lights. His skin felt... ordinary. Everyday. She wasn't sure what she had expected, before she'd

Comments

[similiesslip]

This is really interesting and sad. I..it's so hard to let someone go.

So hard.

You must be a great writer because you now have me all emotionally involved and this is fiction. Man!

[i_id]

Not only fiction, but a one-shot. My apologies!

[medleymisty]

Ooooooh. This is really really good and intriguing and very well-written.

[theun4givables]

Okay, now I'm all invested and stuff so I guess I have no choice but to go read mezzogiorno's piece, now. xD This was very good.

[roina_arwen]

Now I want to know why Clara was in handcuffs - the other piece doesn't answer that, so I'm confused. Otherwise, I really like both of them.

[tatdatcm]

So sad that he set out to teach the world a lesson and his family is the one that suffered so much.

[i_id]

I wouldn't be too sad for him or his family.