.All Because....

Oct 08, 2007 18:11


I woke up past noon and thought,

“Fuck.”

Six or seven people have walked over, around, and through me since five am.

Make that eight.

You called because I died for a few hours last night, and you didn’t hear from me like you said I would.

Then my phone ended itself mid-mourning.

I mean, like I said you would.

“I was worried about you."

A dry, mucus-lined ( Read more... )

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ssryder02 October 8 2007, 23:20:48 UTC
you should have no worries. you're my best friend, and i think we help each other.

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anonymous October 9 2007, 00:50:08 UTC
gripping detail like crawling through glass and gravel
with an amazing spell that has me hooked until the last three letter word. intoxicating and intriguing!

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i_just_float October 9 2007, 02:08:08 UTC
thanks, mystery reader.

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allyourexcuses October 9 2007, 06:41:19 UTC
The through and through emotion from beginning to end was jaw dropping.
The line:
I explained that you caught me mid-explosion, and in your loving attempt to save me, you were hit by shrapnel, nothing more.
felt like moments of many feelings a person would like to describe but gets lost for words, but you used such fine description of the exact feeling in the heat of that moment.

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i_just_float October 9 2007, 06:56:31 UTC
thank you for reading.
i'm sure you know how much it's appreciated.

i always write as soon as i possibly can when the words come.

lately they've been overflowing.

thank you again.

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