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Fanfiction: If At First We Fail

Feb 04, 2006 22:27

A little ditty that is entirely outdated in its setting, alas; however, Quicksilver (an old favorite of mine) looks about geared for a 'coolness comeback' in the Marvel fandom (so does X-Factor, actually, thanks again to Peter David), and I saw a picture of Pietro recently that made my heart flutter. Thus inspired the following tale.

( This story picks right up where issue #88 of PAD's X-Factor faded to black. If it's available, I recommend reading it. To summarize: Crystal is an active Avenger and Quicksilver a member of X-Factor; (as usual) the two are estranged but attempting reconciliation. Both have taken time off for a romantic rendezvous in an isolated cabin in Maine, courtesy of Val Cooper. )

fanfiction, quicksilver, marvel, crystal

Comments 2

riverdresses April 23 2006, 21:33:07 UTC

::sparkles:: This was an amazing piece. You successfully combined smut & a character study, which is something so few authors seem to be able to do. I also loved how you kept Pietro & Crystal so well in character. Will you be writing more for these two in the future?

Wow! i_moonlighter April 29 2006, 20:57:33 UTC

First, you get the honorary no-prize for being the first one to review this fic. ;-D

Thank you very much for the feedback -- these particular points I was consciously trying for, so it's really nice to hear that it came through.

I do have plans for more stories, so keep an eye out -- and thanks again! =)