Another one in the books...

[i_need_the_eggs]

I just finished my initial draft of this still untitled story. Here it is:

Comments

[paperispatient]

I've probably said this before, but your writing warrants saying it again - you're an excellent writer. And you're also braver than me - I never post un/slightly-edited poetry in my journal; rather, I hoard it paranoidly until I think it's vaguely presentable and has undergone about 10 rewrites.

[vangogh86]

interesting way to end it...i like how your stories are super-descriptive -- i just automatically visualize everything happening. i like it...but i'm sad this is the end -- i feel like want there should be more/want more to read.