bites and books; a sherlock/john fic.

[i_sing_anyway]

bites and books, sherlock/john (the bbc's sherlock), pg
(As prompted by twig_tea, I present a Sherlock-as-Beauty and the Beast AU fic! BWAHAHA, MINE IS A PERVY, SILLY LAUGH

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[psychedk]

That was so cute <3

[ourdramaqueen]

This was brilliant in its ambiguity about what Sherlock is! And the characterisation is great. But now I want more! :D

[jenna_marianne]

Yay, very fun! I like how you merged the two canon's throwing in lots of Sherlock & John character beats in.

Little bit of concrit for clarity on this paragraph: He watched him leave, the flickering light from the fireplace casting skittering shadows across the doorway. The last of the melted snow dripped from his hair, darkening the gray jumper across his shoulders, and his limp had reasserted itself with the stress of the evening. Arm still stinging and hot with pain, he steepled his fingers thoughtfully and pressed them against his lips.

Maybe change the second sentence "his" to John (I think you're talking about him since Sherlock--the first sentences "he"--is looking at his jumper & limp? Then switch to Sherlock in the third sentence: He watched him leave, the flickering light from the fireplace casting skittering shadows across the doorway. The last of the melted snow dripped from John's hair, darkening the gray jumper across his shoulders, and his limp had reasserted itself with the stress of the evening. Arm still

[random_nexus]

*gleesqueaks aplenty!*

Oooh! Ooh ooh ooh! I love this, how you can fill in the rest of the story with your imagination, but just enough here to go with, by itself, if you like. Excellent!

B&B is my favorite 'fairy tale', so I'm twice as jazzed due to that.
:D

[anonymiss731]

I glanced quickly over this comment and thought it said you'd jizzed twice...guess the awesome elephant on a trampoline distracted me...Ha ha ha.

[random_nexus]

Hahahahaha! The Trampoline Elephant is good at that.
*giggle*

[mareearia]

beautiful! I loved it!
I was hesitant at first, but what a perfect concept! I'd like to see even more!