SPN fic: Contrails

[i_speak_tongue]

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A/N:This a companion piece to "Sky Pilot," a missing scene (which, uh, ended up being just as long as the original...) from dean's pov, because I felt I neglected the poor broken boy. Extremely angst-ridden.
TITLE: Contrails
WORDS: two thousand six hundred and something
DISC: Kripke's boys.
SUMMARY: see authors note
SPOILERS: ep 1.21, "salvation"

Comments

[trinity_clare]

I'll read it after you fix your html, please. :-)

[i_speak_tongue]

aargg... I'm a layout perfectionist, and I keep twiddling with the lj user link so it will stay on one freakin' line... and bllargg. gimmie 5 minutes...

[trinity_clare]

Naw, this is good. It was just that one broken link that was messing everything else up. *off to read*

[cariadean]

What a wonderful addition to 'Sky Pilot'.
Dean's internal voice is heartbreaking ... even more so because I know that John is finding it hard to separate what's happened to Dean and what happened to the kid in Vietnam ...
Oh... so touching ... isn't it a shame that these men never actually learned to 'talk' to each other? But then I guess that's what makes them 'men'...

[i_speak_tongue]

Why thank you! The themes in this piece and the other are pretty different, but their utter lack of communications skills does shine through in both, doesn't it?

[embroiderama]

Wow, this is wonderful. Dean's pain, and his drugges, uncensored thoughts are intense and feel very true.

[i_speak_tongue]

Glad you liked. Never been on heavy painkillers myself, so it was a bit of a guessing game....

[velvetmagras]

Ouch. Very hurty.

[i_speak_tongue]

Sorry? thank you?

[kellifer_fic]

Oh wow....

They each have a role to play. And those roles never really change. Dean’s not making that mistake again.

This is excellent insight and I love Dean's thoughts about Sam. Too many stories have them getting along ridicilously well even when they were younger and I think it's truer that the respect they have for each other came with age...

[i_speak_tongue]

I just realized something about that line, and how if you think about it in the context of the scene in Devil's Trap where Dean pulls the gun on his dad, it's ouch, even more hurty!

Thanks for reading!