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South Park: The Ten-Thousandth Time (30_tears prompt #08)

Jan 08, 2008 09:34

South Park
The Ten-Thousandth Time
Prompt #08: "Down in the Dumps"
PG-13 (severe language)
440 words
Approx Age: 14

For whatever reason, Cartman's torture hits harder that day. Kyle/Stan.

( 'You're just giving him what he wants, you know.' )

fanfic, character: stan marsh, pairing: kyle/stan, 30_tears: kyle/stan, fandom: south park, character: kyle broflovski, slash, challenges/requests

Comments 10

redheadjew January 8 2008, 16:03:57 UTC

haha,cute

crushedmidnight January 8 2008, 18:55:26 UTC

Thank you!

ivesia19 January 8 2008, 17:57:15 UTC

I loved this!
It was sweet and touching with just a fabulous splash of humor!

crushedmidnight January 8 2008, 18:55:58 UTC

Thank you very much!

blackeyedwicca January 8 2008, 21:49:09 UTC

The sudden pain that shoots up his leg as Kyle stomps hard on his foot is worth it, because under the eerie bawling of the wind, he can hear quiet, wet laughter - I smiled at that, it was a great visual!!

I really loved this!!

crushedmidnight January 9 2008, 00:28:20 UTC

Thanks! I find descriptive writing really fun! ::dork::

blackeyedwicca January 9 2008, 00:50:14 UTC

Haha, don't feel bad, I'm the same ^^

doily_fic January 9 2008, 06:05:00 UTC

That was so sweet. *sniffles* I really liked that. [by the by, friending you]

crushedmidnight January 9 2008, 15:38:02 UTC

Glad you liked it, and thanks for the add!

shinzuku February 13 2008, 02:18:34 UTC

That's awesome.