forgive me 1 ~ key focused & side 2min ~ 1287 words [ part two] any fool can tell the truth, but it requires a man of some sense to lie well( regret is punishment enough )
There had to be an unspoken rule against masturbating to your best friend...there had to be.
THERE IS BUT ALL IS FAIR IN LOVE AND KPOP
The first time Kibum had touched himself while they fucked in the next room, he'd been too chicken to leave his own, but with the bathroom between them the sound quality left a lot to be desired. Everything was muffled and distant. He needed more than that.
DEAR BABY SHISUS YOU USED BATHROOM PLOT I AM JUST SITTING HERE WITH A FACE SPLITTING GRIN XHJDHJKQ
His resolve was circling the drain.
POETRY
oh my god this story is so fucking sexy I've been a little saturated lately but just the way you describe Taemin moaning is making me -part emitted due to high concentrations of TMI- okay I can't type any more until I've read all of it
fuck. i just got home from class and saw this. i haven't even eaten dinner yet. fuck, i didn't even close my bedroom door er...that implied things that didn't happen i swear! i'm too hungry XD OTL but holyshit unf. i'm so glad that you wrote this! you know that key/his hand is my otp /shot sequel soon please!!!!
In that moment it was like impending dawn. Twilight faded into pink as his legs spread, hamstrings stretching. The horizon was starting to glow as his fingers curled into terry cloth. Brilliant white and his senses were blotted out. perfect description. perfect perfect and sjegkbskjdbngjefnh.
okay, so now i get to go eat dinner and try not to think about this. memming ♥
lol. i definitely don't consider myself a "famous fic writer" but i'm flattered that you do! haha. i wish i could have heard the noise. ngl XD and yes! it most definitely was perfect! ♥
Oh, sweet Shiwon, this was amazing. Your characterizaiton of love-sick Key was great. The realism of not feeling the bathroom counter poking him until he was done -- perfectly realistic. And the ending...heart-wrenching.
*sigh* WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW...you're so good at life.
This was so...sad? I think sad would be the way to describe it, but somehow right at the end when Minho said "We heard you" I laughed, a lot...and then I was like "ohhhh nooooo" and then it was sad again!
whew, I would quote my favorite part but then it would be the whole fic... BUT THIS:
" every muscle of his right arm was flooded with lactic acid"
muahaha I felt really proud because I actually learned something last semester in biology! YESSSS!
Anyways, you're amazing as always...I missed you so much!!!! <3 I love you <3 you're great <3
You don't sound dumb, you sound excited! I like excited < I'm really glad you liked it, and that you had that 'hey! i know that!' moment XD I know this first part is kind of angsty and probably dark (because i wrote it >.>) but the next half of this is steamy smut all the way! so don't be too sad for key ok?
also, you laughing at key's plight...ilu /cuddles i'm glad you laughed though, i thought it was funny as hell tbh and thats really the only thing i think this fic was missing until then lol.
I hope you'll leave l2aspberry w/e and join here ok? love you ^^
Key does NOT deserve all of this and 2Min hearing him...I think it's just fate hating on him big time! but please, write a sequel! this can't end like this! Key can't have this kind of ending...pretty please? in other hand, this was just perfect XD
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THERE IS BUT ALL IS FAIR IN LOVE AND KPOP
The first time Kibum had touched himself while they fucked in the next room, he'd been too chicken to leave his own, but with the bathroom between them the sound quality left a lot to be desired. Everything was muffled and distant. He needed more than that.
DEAR BABY SHISUS YOU USED BATHROOM PLOT I AM JUST SITTING HERE WITH A FACE SPLITTING GRIN XHJDHJKQ
His resolve was circling the drain.
POETRY
oh my god this story is so fucking sexy I've been a little saturated lately but just the way you describe Taemin moaning is making me -part emitted due to high concentrations of TMI-
okay I can't type any more until I've read all of it
*SOB*
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I came back to read this again
ugh have my firstborn
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fuck. i just got home from class and saw this. i haven't even eaten dinner yet. fuck, i didn't even close my bedroom door er...that implied things that didn't happen i swear! i'm too hungry XD OTL
but holyshit unf.
i'm so glad that you wrote this!
you know that key/his hand is my otp /shot
sequel soon please!!!!
In that moment it was like impending dawn.
Twilight faded into pink as his legs spread, hamstrings stretching.
The horizon was starting to glow as his fingers curled into terry cloth.
Brilliant white and his senses were blotted out.
perfect description. perfect perfect and sjegkbskjdbngjefnh.
okay, so now i get to go eat dinner and try not to think about this.
memming ♥
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you've always been up there with the other famous fic writers /in awe
you're comments always make me smile and when i got this email notif just now i made this really bizarre squeaky baby noise idek XD
i'm really glad you liked that part i was worried it wouldn't read well.
but apparently it was perfect /preens
fy annie's memming my fic /unf
ilu thanks for reading <3
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i wish i could have heard the noise. ngl XD
and yes! it most definitely was perfect!
♥
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Your characterizaiton of love-sick Key was great. The realism of not feeling the bathroom counter poking him until he was done -- perfectly realistic.
And the ending...heart-wrenching.
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Honestly this isn't really the end.
I'm working on the smutty ot3 conclusion as we speak.
Be on the lookout for it soon ^^
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I look forward to it! <3
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This was so...sad? I think sad would be the way to describe it, but somehow right at the end when Minho said "We heard you" I laughed, a lot...and then I was like "ohhhh nooooo" and then it was sad again!
whew, I would quote my favorite part but then it would be the whole fic... BUT THIS:
" every muscle of his right arm was flooded with lactic acid"
muahaha I felt really proud because I actually learned something last semester in biology! YESSSS!
Anyways, you're amazing as always...I missed you so much!!!! <3 I love you <3 you're great <3
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
( I just reread what i wrote...i sound dumb XP)
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I'm really glad you liked it, and that you had that 'hey! i know that!' moment XD
I know this first part is kind of angsty and probably dark (because i wrote it >.>) but the next half of this is steamy smut all the way! so don't be too sad for key ok?
also, you laughing at key's plight...ilu /cuddles
i'm glad you laughed though, i thought it was funny as hell tbh and thats really the only thing i think this fic was missing until then lol.
I hope you'll leave l2aspberry w/e and join here ok?
love you ^^
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hrmm...threesome? 2minkey action? muahahaha i'm essited XD
LOL, i always laugh at key's plight...but i still love him. <3
OK i definitely will....I love you toooooooooo! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
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and 2Min hearing him...I think it's just fate hating on him big time!
but please, write a sequel!
this can't end like this!
Key can't have this kind of ending...pretty please?
in other hand, this was just perfect XD
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