Out with the Old: Part 20 - Final part

May 25, 2010 12:54


Title: Out with the old
Author: IAdoreCallie
Pairing: Callie and Arizona
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Arizona's journal as the New Year begins. She and Callie are moving in together.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters in this fiction, nor do I have any rights in regards to them. All images fully credited to their original owner.
Authors Note: Sorry ( Read more... )

art: fanfic

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walking_weapon May 25 2010, 20:11:55 UTC
So she's really awake and it's all good...you are evil for ending there! This was beautiful as always and I hope you continue this story in whatever format you want. I wanna see the happy reunion damn it! LOL

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iadorecallie May 25 2010, 20:14:00 UTC
Hehe the reunion will happen in the next one. But I needed to go back to a third person format to do it. There are some things that you can't describe in a journal style. Or maybe Im getting lazy... I dunno. I just always knew I needed to end it there.

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walking_weapon May 25 2010, 20:23:55 UTC
I get it. I'm hoping it's a happy and sexy reunion and those are always better in 3rd person as opposed to a journal entry ;)

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iadorecallie May 25 2010, 20:24:31 UTC
I shall make no further comments ;)

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kicks_316 May 25 2010, 20:13:36 UTC
Sweet way to end this, with Arizona being so comfy around Callie. I loved the style you used to tell the story. I cannot wait for the next story!

I tried talking the chief into letting me have Maternity leave as I was having to mother you.
That was hilarious. Though it felt wrong in a way. Don't know why.

Why did you have to put that at the end? Does it mean Arizona remembers and Callie's being emotional? Or is Callie just about to start a ramble? Confused, I am.

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iadorecallie May 25 2010, 20:15:47 UTC
When I write the next one it will be clear.

But take it as Arizona is back in her own age range again...
The big trigger to unlock her memories was one of the things mentioned in this chapter. That she hadn't previously had access too. I suck at clues so that probably made it really obvious XD

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kicks_316 May 25 2010, 20:25:08 UTC
Awesome! Looking forward to your next fic even more now.

I'd rather not try to figure out clues and such. Makes me too anxious and I end up stalking your lj for updates. ^_^

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iadorecallie May 25 2010, 20:25:55 UTC
Hehe I hope I manage to write a good one then xD

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mcy19 May 25 2010, 20:28:07 UTC
Noo, this so feels like a cliffhanger! :D
Arizona remembers and you stop? Yep, definitely a cliffhanger! ;)
This story was just great. Sure heartbreaking, but still so sweet. And I'm really looking forward to read what you come up with next.

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iadorecallie May 25 2010, 20:29:35 UTC
I love your icon! :D

I don't do Cliff hangers... Ok.... maybe once or twice ;)

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mcy19 May 25 2010, 20:38:47 UTC
Thanks. :)

Cliffhangers are totally ok, as long as they're nice ones. Like Arizona remembering something. Ah, who am I fooling I love cliffhangers in a weird way... :D

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iadorecallie May 25 2010, 21:24:44 UTC
Everyone loves a cliff hanger. It give them space for their imagination to take over :D

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zla2 May 25 2010, 20:47:48 UTC
Seriously? I mean Seriously you stop there?LOL. Great update Im glad that she finally remember. Cant wait for the next part!!

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iadorecallie May 25 2010, 21:24:11 UTC
Yes, seriously, I decided to stop it there x) I'm weird like that xD

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coliebearz May 25 2010, 21:31:06 UTC
Your writing makes me go like this:

:D!!!!! ALKDJFSKDLFJSDLKGHSDJKGH!!!!

AHHHHH!!!!!!

...or something a little less crazy.

But seriously, I've missed this story and leaving you little worship-y comments. I can't wait for the next part in their story. So, it'll be here soon, yeah? :P

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iadorecallie May 25 2010, 21:37:06 UTC
Heheh I'll take the crazy random letters as a compliment xD

I will try and update soon honest xD

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coliebearz May 25 2010, 21:40:20 UTC
Yes, good job, it was a compliment :D

OH, YAY for updating soon!

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iadorecallie May 25 2010, 21:49:29 UTC
Hehe thank you.
Im not sure how fast I can update as the reason for my not writing is still an issue. But I'll see what I can do :)

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