The Great Escape - Part 4

[iadorecallie]

Title: The Great Escape
Author: IAdoreCallie
Pairing: Callie and Arizona
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Camp Torres is no fun for a recovering Arizona.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters in this fiction, nor do I have any rights in regards to them.

Comments

[laniecroft]

Puh, a heavy emotional chapter. Not the easy banter I suspected after the passionate chapter. You wrote those emotions perfectly, how flew into the garden, the I don't feel nothing and especially the part about there will be a time when someone else will be more important. Just the idea of choosing between your partner or your kid ... pure nightmare. How do you always come up with things like that end write them so perfectly?
Awesome chapter.
You always

[iadorecallie]

Thank you :)
This was the chapter I intended to write earlier, but put in the "conjugal visit" one. So I guess having it heavy wouldn't have been such a strange switch if the previous one wasn't there.

I wanted to get in feelings early as I want to try and start lightening things up ready for the next story. There will still be stuff going on, but I think there has been enough doom and gloom for a while. x)

[iadorecallie]

Thats the best compliment ever. Thank you!

[mc_maverick]

Great job. I'm glad they talked about how they were feeling.

[iadorecallie]

There will be more of that. But I want to lighten things up ready for the next story....

[nncyl72]

Your doing an amazing job telling this story!!!

[iadorecallie]

Thank you :) I will still try to do better :)

[sapphicwarrior]

that was a pretty emotional chapter. Very well written though!

[iadorecallie]

Thank you :)