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[iamahypocrite]

it was dusk, I was walking home
making a call with nothing on my mind -
when your smell in the air
sent me very far away and
i forgot who i was and where i am now

the ghosts made my skin crawl
the nostalgia was so tangible

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[iamahypocrite]

Aw thanks nic! And don't worry, it's always okay to copy and it's never cheating. I kind of don't like how this reads but some times moments feel so simple and yet are so very complex...Little moments of nostalgia (especially those guided by sent) always remove me from my place in the world and I always wish I could hold on to the fleeting feeling. There's something positive and wonderful about memories inspired by smells...
Anyways, some times it doesn't take any time at all to write a poem about something...especially if you're running with simple ideas.
haha I obviously didn't spend much time on this!