LJ Idol First Episode

Mar 17, 2014 14:12

Five blocks from Bayfront Hospital, I leave my car parked in the safety of armed security and video surveillance on the third level of the garage and walk to The Cooler. I could drive and it would be safer, but the big box cooler only insures patrons inside the facility, not their belongings on the street, where packs of heat crazed teens run like ( Read more... )

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witchwife March 17 2014, 19:06:49 UTC
I'm gathering that this will be a post apocalyptic type scenario? Love this kind of stuff. Very interested to see more.

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iamapremo March 18 2014, 13:41:40 UTC
Hoping for more to give!

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penpusher March 17 2014, 23:23:32 UTC
Post global-warming, at least.The Cooler. Melters. Love it!

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iamapremo March 18 2014, 13:41:52 UTC
Thanks.

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i_will_not_say March 18 2014, 02:43:34 UTC
Oh, this was cool (well, the weather in the story wasn't, but the story itself was)!

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iamapremo March 18 2014, 13:42:02 UTC
Thank you!

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baxaphobia March 18 2014, 12:46:10 UTC
Interesting story and world. Will you continue this?

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iamapremo March 18 2014, 13:42:24 UTC
I am hoping to expand it as the competition continues.

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itsjustc March 18 2014, 13:01:48 UTC
Interesting story. I enjoyed reading this.

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iamapremo March 18 2014, 13:42:34 UTC
Thanks!

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