White Collar Fic - Past the Point of No Return

[iamhere23]

Title: Past the Point of No Return
Author: iamhere23
Rating: R
Word Count: ~1,200
Characters: Neal Caffrey, Peter Burke
Genre: Dark!fic, Death!fic
Spoilers: None
Warnings: (highlight to reveal) Major Torture, Hunger, Hallucinations, Convulsions, Murder, Death of major characters, Suicide
Summary: It was a strange feeling, wanting to die. Normally, people spend

Comments

[pipilj]

Wow, this story is so great, loved the darkness, horror and angst you portrayed.

[iamhere23]

I was kind of worried about the whole horror and darkness thing, but I think it turned out just right.

Thanks for commenting! :)

[elrhiarhodan]

Oh, this is terrible. And very wonderful too. It hurt like hell, but it's a terrific story.

Thank you.

[iamhere23]

I know, it's simply horrible, isn't it? It's the first time I kill the boys, and yes, it hurt.

Thank you for your comment!

[rabidchild]

Wonderfully dark. A great addition to the 'fest!

[iamhere23]

Thank you! :)

[kanarek13]

Oh, wow. This is so wonderfully dark and twisted and gut-wrenching and heartbreaking. Guh. Whump in its purest form. Thank you so much \o/ Indeed, an amazing addition to the fest :D

[iamhere23]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it's darky-dark with a side order of dark! :)

[winterstar95]

Yikes, that is one dark and twisted fic. Of course, I am going to pretend it was all a horrible nightmare induced by bad potatoes. *g*

But really well done for darkness and writing!

[iamhere23]

Sure, you can pretend it's a nightmare. I kind of want to believe that myself!

Thanks for commenting!