BAD POETRY

[iamtragic]

alice told me to do this.

its the second poem i have ever written. it is completly random and means nothing . its tittle RANDOM#2

Treasure as it were dust rising up; The great crowd who gave; Who were there to take possesion; To repurchace the zeal which was stolen from atop the pillars and lampstands; The force of fire that they struck with

Comments

[lebanane]

I THOUGHT THIS WAS GONNA BE A JOKE BUT HONESTLY THIS IS REALLY SWEET

[iamtragic]

serious?

[lebanane]

yeah !!! "and all those dripping of honey" that part is amazing!

[safeasmilk_]

YOU ARE GOOD!

[iamtragic]

there will be more to come. iver writtin alot but i do not know when i will post them again.