Comments | ian_made_of_ham: 665 Chapter 1: The Fight at Penultimate Coffee Title Page

ian_made_of_ham

665 Chapter 1: The Fight at Penultimate Coffee Title Page

Oct 07, 2009 00:38

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bleucitrus October 7 2009, 14:26:34 UTC

Nice use of tones and I like how the title blends into the sign with the coffee shop's name. Good technique sir

ian_made_of_ham October 8 2009, 01:20:09 UTC

Thank you, I've been trying to put a lot of effort into this sort of stuff.

bleucitrus October 8 2009, 01:43:09 UTC

It shows, you're doing a good job

grahamtastic October 7 2009, 17:27:14 UTC

YES! SEVERAL TIMES YES! MANY A YES WILL YOU HAVE, SIR!!

ian_made_of_ham October 8 2009, 01:27:20 UTC

Well that's wonderful, but what about some constructive criticism?

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ian_made_of_ham October 8 2009, 01:27:39 UTC

Halftones

here's what dad thinks anonymous October 20 2009, 20:26:49 UTC

Oh yeah. this is very, very good. The dot screens are beautiful. If you want some constructive criticism, i would say work on the spacing of "Penultimate". the "P" and "E" and "L" and "T" could be closer together. Kern it, dammit!!!

Lovingly,
Dad

Re: here's what dad thinks ian_made_of_ham October 22 2009, 16:11:33 UTC

Yeah yeah, it's always about kerning with you isn't it?