Comments | ianam1983: Never Did Run Smooth, Ch. 23

ianam1983

Never Did Run Smooth, Ch. 23

Nov 06, 2009 00:26

Well, it's... a new Maximal. Um, yay?

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slash, rattrap, dinobot

Comments 7

gogglehead84 November 6 2009, 12:58:37 UTC

Well this new maximal seems ...fun lol.

blkdragonqueen November 6 2009, 22:09:58 UTC

YAY MONKEY! ^___^ I love him shooting Terrorsaur with his own gun! XD and Sensible Waspinator! <3 I always loved him! And the new Maximal seems like she's going to be a blast and cause a lot of mayhem! Whether it's against the Maximals or Preds is still anyone's guess! XD

123myself November 6 2009, 22:43:56 UTC

This new maximal... is she around the same age as Cheetor? Because if so, he just found a new friend who'll actually know how to play games with him. By everyone elses reaction though, Cheetor's going to be just about the only friend she's going to get, as they're all so dissapointed.

I liked her shooting Terrorsaur with his own gun. Gives me a feeling that in the future she's going to be good at weaponry, as well as knowing she'll get better mentally because she recognized the gun would stop Terrorsaur.

ianam1983 November 6 2009, 23:54:22 UTC

Actual age is debatable, but she's about the same level of maturity. ;)

Don't worry too much about the others' reactions. Primal's just worried, Rhinox is frustrated because he has more problems to fix, and Dinobot... well, I'll explain Dinobot's response shortly. I'm pretty sure Mim's going to surprise them all, though.

psychokitty013 November 10 2009, 01:59:52 UTC

Mimic is amusing. Monkey's with guns are amusing, period.

I love the line "He looked very Predacon as he answered"

Cause, Dinobot looking Predacon is hilarious and true.

chimeronette November 12 2009, 23:26:52 UTC

Well, I have been reading your fic for quite a while now, mostly for those Cheetor bits... Sorry, m'not the biggest fan of Dinobot ( ... )

ianam1983 November 13 2009, 00:46:28 UTC

Hell, I'm not a big Cheetor fan, but I thought he deserved a writer giving him a chance. He's usually either despised or dumbed down as solely a kid character, and lord knows the canon wasn't very kind to him. I'm taking his character in an interesting direction... eventually. Kid's got a ways to go before you'll really start to notice a change ( ... )